Breakfast— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，句子结构混乱，且最后一句“you make me feel good”与问题无关。建议简化句子，避免多余内容，保持回答与问题相关。

例: I usually eat scrambled eggs, cereal, and croissants for breakfast because I work at a hotel restaurant where these are commonly served.

提案: 回答较好，表达了观点并给出理由，但“stay focus”应为“stay focused”，且例子可以更具体。建议注意语法细节，丰富例子内容。

例: Yes, I believe breakfast is very important because it gives me energy and helps me stay focused during work. For instance, after eating breakfast, I feel more confident and friendly when interacting with guests.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“my try of food”不明确。建议理清句子结构，使用正确时态和表达，避免重复。

例: Yes, my mornings have changed. As a child, I always ate breakfast because my parents encouraged me, but in college, I often skipped it due to a busy schedule.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且有些重复。建议分句表达，避免冗长，增强表达清晰度。

例: Yes, I want to change my morning routine. I have realized that breakfast is very important because it gives me energy and motivation. Also, having breakfast helps me feel that I have more time to enjoy the day.

× Since I work at a hotel restaurant so they usually provide us like scrambled eggs, potato chips, cereal and some continental breakfast like pastry croissants.

✓ Since I work at a hotel restaurant, they usually provide us with scrambled eggs, potato chips, cereal, and some continental breakfast like pastry croissants.

句中使用了两个连词“Since”和“so”，造成重复，应去掉“so”。此外，“provide us like”用法错误，应为“provide us with”。

× Since I work at a hotel restaurant so they usually provide us like scrambled eggs, potato chips, cereal and some continental breakfast like pastry croissants.

✓ Since I work at a hotel restaurant, they usually provide us with scrambled eggs, potato chips, cereal, and some continental breakfast like pastry croissants.

动词“provide”后应接介词“with”，表示“提供给我们”，而不是“like”。

× And you make me feel good.

✓ And it makes me feel good.

此处指代早餐或工作环境，应使用第三人称单数代词“it”，而非“you”。

× It not only provides you energy but also helps you stay focus throughout the morning.

✓ It not only provides you with energy but also helps you stay focused throughout the morning.

“provide”后应加介词“with”；“stay”后应接形容词“focused”，表示“保持专注”。

× It not only provides you energy but also helps you stay focus throughout the morning.

✓ It not only provides you with energy but also helps you stay focused throughout the morning.

“provide”后应接介词“with”，表示“提供”；“stay”后应接形容词“focused”，表示“保持专注”。

× For example, it makes me feel more sociable to reach out to the guests.

✓ For example, it makes me feel more sociable when I reach out to the guests.

“to reach out”不合适，改为“when I reach out”更符合表达习惯。

× Yes, there are some differences between the mornings of my try of food and now.

✓ Yes, there are some differences between the mornings of my childhood and now.

“try of food”无意义，应为“childhood”，表示“童年”。

× When I was a when I was a kid, I usually ate breakfast regularly because my parents encouraged me to have a healthy breakfast to start the day.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually ate breakfast regularly because my parents encouraged me to have a healthy breakfast to start the day.

句中重复了“when I was a”，应删除多余部分。

× But when I was in the college, I often skip the breakfast.

✓ But when I was in college, I often skipped breakfast.

“skip”应使用过去式“skipped”，因为描述过去的习惯；“in the college”应为“in college”，不加冠词；“the breakfast”应去掉定冠词。

× Yes, I would like to change my morning routine 'cause when I was growing up I realized that breakfast is the most important meal of the day and not only gives me energy and motivation to start a whole new day, but also reminds me that I have more time in the day.

✓ Yes, I would like to change my morning routine because when I was growing up, I realized that breakfast is the most important meal of the day and not only gives me energy and motivation to start a whole new day, but also reminds me that I have more time in the day.

“'cause”是口语缩写，正式场合应使用“because”；句中缺少逗号，影响句子结构清晰。

× Yes, I would like to change my morning routine 'cause when I was growing up I realized that breakfast is the most important meal of the day and not only gives me energy and motivation to start a whole new day, but also reminds me that I have more time in the day.

✓ Yes, I would like to change my morning routine because when I was growing up, I realized that breakfast is the most important meal of the day and it not only gives me energy and motivation to start a whole new day, but also reminds me that I have more time in the day.

“not only... but also”结构前应有主语“it”，使句子完整。