Breakfast— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, say "a cup of coffee" instead of "cup of coffee" and "in my youth" instead of "in my young age." Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep the answer concise.

例: I usually eat boiled eggs and a cup of coffee for breakfast. Sometimes, I add toast or fruits to make it more balanced because I want to stay healthy in my youth.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. For example, use "when" instead of "while" and avoid repeating "we have." Also, try to combine sentences for better flow.

例: Definitely, I think breakfast is very important because when we wake up in the morning, our stomachs are empty and we lack energy. However, having breakfast provides us with energy, so we feel more active throughout the day.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, use "there is a huge difference" and "I have to wake up." Also, use past tense consistently when talking about childhood. Try to use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Frankly speaking, there is a huge difference between my childhood mornings and now. Currently, I have to wake up early for my morning classes and prepare breakfast by myself. However, when I was a child, I didn't have to do anything and could wake up late.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammar errors and unclear phrases. For example, "I'd make the favorite morning routine" is unclear. Use consistent tense and clearer expressions. Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Honestly, I don't want to change my morning routine because it is well managed and suits me. I usually get up early at 5:00, do some yoga, and then have my breakfast, which works well for me.

× Well, most often I eat boiled eggs and cup of coffee, but sometimes I add some toast or fruits to make my breakfast more balanced as I want to be healthy in my young age.

✓ Well, most often I eat boiled eggs and a cup of coffee, but sometimes I add some toast or fruit to make my breakfast more balanced as I want to be healthy in my young age.

The phrase 'cup of coffee' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it because it is singular and countable. Also, 'fruits' is generally uncountable when referring to food in general, so 'fruit' is more appropriate here.

× Definitely. I think having a breakfast is really important. While we get up early in the morning, we have empty stomachs and we have no energy. However, having a breakfast will provide us some energy and we will feel more active.

✓ Definitely. I think having breakfast is really important. While we get up early in the morning, we have empty stomachs and no energy. However, having breakfast will provide us with some energy and we will feel more active.

The word 'breakfast' is an uncountable noun here and does not need the article 'a'. Also, 'provide us some energy' should be 'provide us with some energy' to use the correct preposition.

× Frankly speaking, there is huge difference between the morning of my childhood and now. In the present time, I had to woke up only for my morning classes and have to prepare the breakfast by myself. But when I was a child, I had to do nothing. I can wake up late.

✓ Frankly speaking, there is a huge difference between the mornings of my childhood and now. At present, I have to wake up only for my morning classes and prepare breakfast by myself. But when I was a child, I had to do nothing. I could wake up late.

The phrase 'huge difference' needs the article 'a'. 'Morning' should be plural 'mornings' to compare general times. 'Had to woke up' is incorrect; it should be 'have to wake up' to match present tense. 'Prepare the breakfast' should be 'prepare breakfast' as 'breakfast' is uncountable here. 'I can wake up late' should be 'I could wake up late' to refer to past ability.

× Honestly, I don't want to change my morning routine because it's good as it is and it's well managed. I'd make the favorite morning routine. For me, I got up early at 5:00 and do some yoga then have my breakfast which is quite a good for me.

✓ Honestly, I don't want to change my morning routine because it's good as it is and it's well managed. I'd keep my favorite morning routine. For me, I get up early at 5:00, do some yoga, then have my breakfast which is quite good for me.

'I'd make the favorite morning routine' is unclear and incorrect; 'I'd keep my favorite morning routine' is better. 'Got up' should be 'get up' to match present tense. 'Do some yoga then have my breakfast' needs commas for clarity. 'Quite a good for me' should be 'quite good for me' without 'a'.