Breakfast— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with clear sentences and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct sentence structures to express your ideas naturally.

例: I usually eat breakfast prepared by my mother at home because I prefer homemade food over buying from shops. I respect her cooking and enjoy starting my day with her meals.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but needs better grammar and coherence. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid repetition. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

例: Yes, breakfast is very important because it provides energy for the whole day. When a person eats breakfast, they feel more productive and less tired throughout the day.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, try to add linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, my mornings are different now compared to my childhood. When I was a child, I did not have to wake up early, but now I have to because of my busy schedule. For example, I wake up at 5:00 AM every day.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your reasons and plans, and avoid unnecessary repetition.

例: Yes, I would like to change my morning routine by waking up earlier, around 3:00 AM. This would help me feel more energetic, and I could use the extra time to go for a walk and exercise at the gym.

× Well, it's depend on my homes.

✓ Well, it depends on my home.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'homes' should be singular 'home' to refer to the place where the speaker lives.

× I only it was my mother mega because I do not like to against him like purchasing from shops.

✓ I only eat what my mother makes because I do not like to buy from shops.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns and incorrect verb usage. 'It was my mother mega' is incorrect; it should be 'my mother makes'. 'Against him like purchasing' is incorrect; it should be 'buy from shops'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun and verb use.

× I respect my mother's in the matter of breakfast.

✓ I respect my mother when it comes to breakfast.

'My mother's' is possessive and incomplete here. The sentence should use 'my mother' as the object and clarify the meaning with 'when it comes to breakfast' for proper expression.

× Yeah, so it is important to do breakfast in the morning because it made me energetic all the day.

✓ Yeah, so it is important to have breakfast in the morning because it makes me energetic all day.

'Do breakfast' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have breakfast'. 'Made' should be present tense 'makes' to match the present context. 'All the day' should be 'all day' for natural expression.

× It means a person take breakfast then he feel more productive throughout the day.

✓ It means a person takes breakfast then he feels more productive throughout the day.

The verbs 'take' and 'feel' need to be in third person singular present tense 'takes' and 'feels' to agree with the subject 'a person'.

× He he never felt tired because breakfast give the energy.

✓ He never feels tired because breakfast gives him energy.

'He he' is a repetition error. 'Felt' should be present tense 'feels' to match the ongoing condition. 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'breakfast'. Added 'him' for clarity.

× Yes, in my childhood I I have no responsibility to walk up in the morning but now I have due to my hectic schedule.

✓ Yes, in my childhood I had no responsibility to wake up in the morning but now I have due to my hectic schedule.

'Have' should be past tense 'had' to refer to childhood. 'Walk up' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'wake up'. Removed repeated 'I'.

× Now I have a compiled to wake up early in the morning like I daily wake up at 5:00 AM.

✓ Now I am compelled to wake up early in the morning; I wake up daily at 5:00 AM.

'Have a compiled' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'am compelled'. The sentence is split for clarity. 'Like' is unnecessary here.

× I mentioned in a four person I like to wake up more early like 3:00 AM because that made me more energetic throughout the day because after working at 3:00 AM and I plan to go for walking and gym.

✓ I mentioned before that I like to wake up earlier, like at 3:00 AM, because that makes me more energetic throughout the day. After waking up at 3:00 AM, I plan to go for a walk and to the gym.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns and structure. 'In a four person' is unclear and removed. 'More early' should be 'earlier'. 'Made' should be present tense 'makes'. 'After working at 3:00 AM' is incorrect; should be 'after waking up at 3:00 AM'. Added articles 'a walk' and 'to the gym' for correctness.