Breakfast— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by avoiding awkward phrasing and redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be specific about your habits. For example, mention how often you eat certain foods and why.

例: I usually have boiled eggs and toast for breakfast because they give me energy. However, sometimes I prefer to eat fruits and drink milk instead, especially when I want something lighter.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words for coherence. Also, try to be more specific about why breakfast is important, perhaps by giving examples or explaining the benefits.

例: Yes, I believe breakfast is the most important meal because it provides the energy needed to focus and perform well during the day. For instance, after eating breakfast, I feel more alert and ready to tackle difficult tasks.

提案: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and linking words to make the response more coherent. Also, provide more specific details about the differences in your morning routines.

例: Yes, when I was a child, I used to wake up early, take a bath, and go to school. However, now that I am working, my mornings are busier, and I don't have much time for activities like studying.

提案: Make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and specify what changes you want to make and why.

例: Yes, I would like to change my morning routine because I often wake up late. I want to get up earlier so I can do some physical exercise or go to the gym before starting my day.

× Well, I usually do boiled eggs and toast in my breakfast, but sometime I like to eat. Fruits and milk instead of eggs.

✓ Well, I usually have boiled eggs and toast for my breakfast, but sometimes I like to eat fruits and drink milk instead of eggs.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). Also, 'do boiled eggs' is incorrect; the verb 'have' is appropriate for eating. 'In my breakfast' should be 'for my breakfast'. The sentence 'I like to eat. Fruits and milk' is fragmented and should be combined properly. Additionally, 'milk' is a drink, so 'drink milk' is more appropriate.

× Yes, in my opinion breakfast is very important meal of the day because it gives a good start of the day and provide the necessary energy to carry out the difficult task throughout the day.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, breakfast is a very important meal of the day because it gives a good start to the day and provides the necessary energy to carry out difficult tasks throughout the day.

The phrase 'very important meal' needs an article 'a' before 'very'. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'breakfast'. 'Start of the day' should be 'start to the day'. 'Difficult task' should be plural 'difficult tasks' to match the context.

× Yes, whenever a child, I used to get up in the early in the morning, umm then I used to take a bath and go to the school.

✓ Yes, whenever I was a child, I used to get up early in the morning, then I used to take a bath and go to school.

The phrase 'whenever a child' is incomplete; it should be 'whenever I was a child'. 'In the early in the morning' is redundant; 'early in the morning' is correct. 'Go to the school' should be 'go to school' unless referring to a specific school.

× But now, now that I'm working, I don't get too much time to do activities like studying in the morning.

✓ But now, now that I'm working, I don't have much time to do activities like studying in the morning.

'Get too much time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have much time' or 'get much time'. 'Too much' implies excess, which is not the intended meaning here.

× Yes, I would like to change my morning routine because I tend to get up a little late nowadays, but I would like to change it and I would prefer to eat to rise a little early and do some physical activities or go to the gym.

✓ Yes, I would like to change my morning routine because I tend to get up a little late nowadays, but I would like to change it and prefer to rise a little earlier and do some physical activities or go to the gym.

The phrase 'prefer to eat to rise' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'prefer to rise a little earlier'. Also, 'earlier' is the correct comparative form of 'early' in this context.