Breakfast— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime kullanımı var. "Two egg" yerine "two eggs" demelisiniz ve "a bagel with two eggs and a cucumber" ifadesi daha doğal olur. Ayrıca, cevabınızı biraz daha detaylandırarak daha etkili yapabilirsiniz.

例: I usually eat a bagel with two eggs and a cucumber for breakfast because it gives me enough energy to start my day.

提案: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı var ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. "Do breakfast" yerine "have breakfast" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, kahvaltının önemine dair daha net ve mantıklı bir görüş belirtmeniz faydalı olur.

例: I think breakfast is important because it provides energy for the day, but sometimes I skip it due to my busy schedule.

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve anlam açısından sorunlar var. "Eat" yerine "ate" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz karışık ve net değil. Cevabınızı daha açık ve düzenli yapmalısınız.

例: There are some differences. When I was a child, I ate a bagel with tea and tomato for breakfast, but now I usually have different foods depending on the day.

提案: Cümle yapınızda zaman uyumsuzluğu ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "I'm doing" yerine "I have been doing" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cevabınızı daha akıcı ve doğal hale getirmek için cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin.

例: No, I wouldn't like to change my morning routine because I have been following it since I was eight, and I still enjoy it.

× I usually eat bagel with two egg and a cucumber.

✓ I usually eat a bagel with two eggs and a cucumber.

The nouns 'bagel' and 'egg' need correct singular/plural forms. 'Bagel' is singular and requires an article 'a'. 'Egg' should be plural 'eggs' because there are two.

× No, I don't think so because sometimes I don't even do breakfast.

✓ No, I don't think so because sometimes I don't even have breakfast.

The verb 'do' is incorrectly used with 'breakfast'. The correct verb collocation is 'have breakfast'.

× I usually do lunch with my afternoon dinner.

✓ I usually have lunch with my afternoon dinner.

Similar to the previous sentence, 'do lunch' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have lunch'.

× No, actually, when I was a child, I usually eat a bagel with a tea and a tomato with that.

✓ No, actually, when I was a child, I usually ate a bagel with tea and a tomato with that.

The verb 'eat' should be in the past tense 'ate' to match the past time reference 'when I was a child'. Also, 'a tea' is incorrect; 'tea' is uncountable and does not need an article.

× And, and yes, that's my all childhood foods, breakfast actually.

✓ And, yes, those were all my childhood breakfast foods.

The phrase 'my all childhood foods' is incorrect. 'All' should precede the noun phrase properly, and 'foods' is better replaced with 'breakfast foods' for clarity.

× And still I do write in weekdays, weekends.

✓ And I still write on weekdays and weekends.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Do write' is unnecessary here, and 'in weekdays, weekends' should be 'on weekdays and weekends'.

× No I don't, I'm doing this morning routine since I was 8 and I still like it how I doing it so I don't want to change it.

✓ No, I don't. I've been doing this morning routine since I was 8, and I still like how I do it, so I don't want to change it.

The present continuous 'I'm doing' is incorrect for an action started in the past and continuing; present perfect continuous 'I've been doing' is appropriate. Also, 'how I doing it' should be 'how I do it'.