Breakfast— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ достаточно подробный, но стоит избегать излишней информации и повторов. Попробуйте сделать ответ более естественным и связным, используя связующие слова и более разнообразную лексику.

例: I usually start my breakfast by drinking two glasses of water. After about 10 minutes, I eat rice porridge, but sometimes I choose other types. Then, I usually have a banana or an apple to finish my meal.

提案: Ответ хороший, но стоит улучшить грамматику и связность. Используйте более точные выражения и связывающие слова для плавности речи.

例: I believe the importance of breakfast varies from person to person because everyone feels differently about it. However, for me personally, breakfast is extremely important, and I never leave home without eating something first.

提案: Ответ понятен, но можно улучшить структуру и добавить связующие слова для более естественного звучания. Также стоит использовать более разнообразную лексику.

例: Honestly, I don't think there are many differences. Since childhood, I have been taught to drink two glasses of warm water every morning and then eat porridge. I still follow this routine now because I feel unwell without it.

提案: Ответ хороший, но можно сделать его более плавным и связным, используя подходящие связующие слова и избегая повторов.

例: Actually, I wouldn't want to change much because I feel comfortable with my morning routine. The only thing I might change is waking up a bit earlier so I can take a shower before having breakfast.

× everyone feel different about breakfast

✓ everyone feels different about breakfast

The subject 'everyone' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'feels' to agree with the subject.

× I can't go out of my home without eat something

✓ I can't go out of my home without eating something

After 'without', the verb should be in the gerund form '-ing'. Therefore, 'eat' should be changed to 'eating'.

× From the early childhood I have been taught that it is necessary to drink 2 glasses of warm water every morning and then eat porridge

✓ From early childhood I was taught that it is necessary to drink 2 glasses of warm water every morning and then eat porridge

The phrase 'From the early childhood' is better expressed as 'From early childhood'. Also, 'have been taught' suggests a present perfect passive which is less appropriate here; simple past passive 'was taught' fits better to indicate a past event.

× I feel comfortable about my morning routine

✓ I feel comfortable with my morning routine

The correct preposition to use with 'comfortable' in this context is 'with', not 'about'.

× Maybe only there is only one thing I would like to change and it is getting up a bit earlier to take a shower before my breakfast

✓ Maybe there is only one thing I would like to change, and it is getting up a bit earlier to take a shower before my breakfast

The phrase 'Maybe only there is only one thing' is redundant and awkward. Removing the first 'only' and adding a comma before 'and' improves clarity and correctness.