Breakfast— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid grammatical errors such as 'I usually eats' and reduce filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Use a clear topic sentence and add specific details with linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. For example, mention why you prefer jam or cheese and how it benefits you.

例: I usually have a cup of tea with a piece of bread topped with either jam or cheese. I prefer this simple breakfast because it is quick to prepare and provides enough energy to start my day. Additionally, the variety between jam and cheese keeps my breakfast interesting.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many hesitations. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your points logically and provide specific reasons why breakfast is important.

例: Yes, I believe breakfast is very important because after sleeping for 8 or 9 hours, the body needs fuel to restore energy. Therefore, eating breakfast helps to kick-start metabolism and improves concentration throughout the morning.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations. Make sure to complete your sentences and provide specific details about the differences. Use linking words to organise your ideas clearly and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, there are definitely differences between my mornings now and when I was a child. As a child, I did not have a fixed morning routine and often spent time playing or relaxing. However, now I follow a strict schedule to prepare for work.

提案: Avoid filler words and complete your sentences fully. Provide clear reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about the benefits you expect from running in the morning.

例: Yes, I would like to add 30 minutes of running to my morning routine before work because I believe it can improve my focus and boost my mood. Moreover, regular exercise helps increase my energy levels throughout the day.

× I usually eats a cup of tea with a piece of bread, umm, either jam or cheese umm.

✓ I usually eat a cup of tea with a piece of bread, umm, either jam or cheese umm.

The verb 'eat' should be in the base form 'eat' when used with the first person singular subject 'I'. Using 'eats' is incorrect because 'eats' is the third person singular form. The subject-verb agreement rule requires the verb to match the subject in number and person.

× I would like this uh, simple breakfast because it's uh, quick to prepare and give me enough energy for rest of my day umm.

✓ I would like this uh, simple breakfast because it's uh, quick to prepare and gives me enough energy for the rest of my day umm.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to breakfast). Also, the phrase 'for rest of my day' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'rest'. Correct subject-verb agreement and article usage improve clarity.

× people usually asleep around 8 or 9 hours uh, that means umm, they don't anything, uh, that they don't eat anything uh, during that time

✓ people usually sleep around 8 or 9 hours uh, that means umm, they don't eat anything uh, during that time

The verb 'asleep' is an adjective, not a verb. The correct verb is 'sleep'. Also, 'they don't anything' is incomplete and should be 'they don't eat anything'. These corrections ensure proper verb usage and sentence completeness.

× there are definitely difference between, uh, my morning now and when I was a child

✓ there are definitely differences between, uh, my morning now and when I was a child

The noun 'difference' should be plural 'differences' because 'there are' indicates plural. This correction aligns the subject and noun number correctly.

× when I was a child, I don't have, uh, fixed, uh, I didn't have fixed, uh, morning routines

✓ when I was a child, I didn't have fixed morning routines

The phrase 'I don't have' is present tense and incorrect when referring to the past. The correct past tense form is 'I didn't have'. Also, the repetition is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.