Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'Germany' thay vì 'German'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I can speak Vietnamese, English, and German. I have been studying German recently because I plan to go abroad soon. Learning these languages helps me communicate better in different countries.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều phần không liên quan hoặc lặp lại. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because it requires a lot of time and practice. For example, I have many school assignments, so it is hard to find enough time to study a new language properly.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lủng củng và thiếu liên kết. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: Yes, I plan to learn more languages in the future. Currently, I am learning German and I feel motivated to continue. Learning new languages will help me travel and communicate with people from different countries.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I learn English because it is an important subject for my studies and future career. Also, I find English fun and relatively easy to learn, which motivates me to improve every day.

× Well speaking minimises my mother language and English is one of the subject.

✓ Well, speaking minimizes my mother tongue and English is one of the subjects.

The adjective 'mother' should be part of the compound noun 'mother tongue' to correctly refer to one's native language. Also, 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because it refers to one among multiple subjects. Additionally, 'minimises' is a British spelling; 'minimizes' is American English, but both are acceptable depending on the variant used.

× I really need to study his goal and now Germany is one of the language.

✓ I really need to study this goal and now German is one of the languages.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrect here; it should be 'this' to refer to the current goal. 'Germany' is a country, but the language is 'German'. Also, 'language' should be plural 'languages' because it refers to one among multiple languages.

× Now I am 34 to go to out aboard.

✓ Now I am 34 and want to go abroad.

The phrase 'to go to out aboard' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'go abroad' without 'to' or 'out'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear; adding 'and want' clarifies the meaning.

× Well, I think it is really hard to learn a different language because.

✓ Well, I think it is really hard to learn a different language.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'because' without completing the reason, which is a sentence structure error. Removing 'because' completes the sentence properly.

× I said for me it is.

✓ I think for me it is.

The phrase 'I said for me it is' is awkward and unclear. Replacing 'said' with 'think' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× A hard thing to do because uh, lab school things and a lot of things and tabs I need to do so I don't have any time to learn learn only one glitch.

✓ It is a hard thing to do because of lab school things and a lot of tasks I need to do, so I don't have any time to learn, only one language.

The sentence is confusing and contains incorrect words like 'tabs' and 'glitch'. 'Tabs' likely means 'tasks', and 'glitch' should be 'language'. Also, 'because' should be followed by 'of' to connect the reason properly.

× Well, yes, I will learn other language in the future because as I do I am learning Germany and now I'm starting to feel more eager so.

✓ Well, yes, I will learn other languages in the future because as I do, I am learning German and now I'm starting to feel more eager.

'Other language' should be plural 'other languages' to indicate more than one language. 'Germany' should be 'German' to refer to the language.

× Any well another language will help me to go abroad in the future and also it help me to speak another language.

✓ Also, another language will help me to go abroad in the future and also help me to speak another language.

The phrase 'Any well' is incorrect and unnecessary. Also, 'help' should be consistent in tense and number; 'it help' should be 'it helps' or simply 'help' if the subject is plural or implied.

× What I learn English because this is one of the most important subject I need to learn and also English is really fun and easy to learn.

✓ I learn English because it is one of the most important subjects I need to learn and also English is really fun and easy to learn.

'What I learn English' is incorrect; it should be 'I learn English'. Also, 'this' should be 'it' to refer to English. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects'.

× So yeah I am learning English as it important section in my life.

✓ So yeah, I am learning English as it is an important part of my life.

'It important section' is incorrect; it should be 'it is an important part' or 'an important section'. Also, adding 'is' is necessary for correct sentence structure.