Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I can speak my mother tongue, Chinese. Besides that, I can speak English and Korean, and I know a little Japanese.

提案: 回答不连贯，表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词连接句子。

例: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult at first, but once you learn the basics, it becomes easier.

提案: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，建议练习完整句子表达，避免语法错误，并清晰表达未来计划。

例: Yes, I really love learning languages. In the future, I will start learning French and Spanish.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议用完整句子表达原因，避免断句，清晰说明学习英语的动机。

例: I started learning English because it was my basic course. Later, I found that I really love the language.

× Firstly I can speak my mother language is Chinese and the second I can speak English.

✓ Firstly, my mother language is Chinese, and secondly, I can speak English.

原句结构混乱，缺少必要的连接词和标点，导致句意不清。应使用逗号分隔，并用连接词“and”连接两个并列句，使句子结构完整。

× Yes, I think is very difficult, but in the beginning.

✓ Yes, I think it is very difficult at the beginning.

原句缺少主语“it”，且“but in the beginning”表达不完整，应改为“at the beginning”表示时间状语。

× I think the. Aids a base, easy to start. Learning a new language.

✓ I think the basics are easy to start when learning a new language.

原句断句错误，语序混乱，缺少谓语动词。应将句子合并，调整语序，使表达清晰完整。

× Yes. Are they really love? Learn languages and then. Aye. Will be beginning to learn the French is and Spanish.

✓ Yes, I really love learning languages, and then I will begin to learn French and Spanish.

原句断句不当，词语使用错误（如“Are they really love?”），缺少主语和谓语，语序混乱。应调整句子结构，使用正确的主谓宾结构。

× At first I learn English because. My basic course. Is English. And then? During I. 98. I find I love it.

✓ At first, I learned English because my basic course was English. Then, during 1998, I found that I loved it.

原句断句错误，时态使用不当，缺少连贯性。应使用过去时态描述过去的事情，并将句子连贯表达。