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Part 1

試験官

What languages can you speak?

受験者

Now I can speak three kinds of language, which is Chinese, English and French. And I, I, I learned, I have learned a speaking English for almost, uh, almost 20 years. And I and I.

試験官

Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?

受験者

Yes, I think it's very difficult to learn a new language because we have different logic about speaking language such as French. If you want to speak the nighty night in French, sugar say 90 + 9 and uh, your will make a.

試験官

Will you learn other languages in the future?

受験者

Yes, I'm, I'm really interested in learning other languages and I hope that I will learn about Japanese or Korean and Germany. And I also prepared for a study aboard and, uh, if I go to the germ.

試験官

Why do you learn English?

受験者

First of all, I think learning English is a composer equals to Chinese or Chinese students. And secondly, I think it's a, it's a, it's a practical, practical skill to communicate with foreigners with.

評価

総合

総合: 5.0流暢さと一貫性: 5.5発音: 5.0文法: 5.0語彙: 5.0

Part 1

What languages can you speak?

スコア: 55.0

提案: 回答时语言表达不够流畅,有重复和语法错误。建议简洁明了地回答问题,避免重复,并注意语法正确。

: I can speak three languages: Chinese, English, and French. I have been learning English for almost 20 years.

Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?

スコア: 40.0

提案: 回答内容不清晰,表达混乱,缺乏具体细节。建议回答时条理清楚,使用连贯的句子,并举具体例子说明。

: Yes, learning a new language is difficult because different languages have different structures. For example, in French, numbers are combined in a unique way, which can be confusing.

Will you learn other languages in the future?

スコア: 50.0

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整。建议使用完整句子表达兴趣和计划,并注意语法准确。

: Yes, I am interested in learning other languages like Japanese, Korean, and German. I am also preparing to study abroad, which will help me improve my language skills.

Why do you learn English?

スコア: 45.0

提案: 回答不够清晰,表达重复且语法错误较多。建议明确表达学习英语的原因,避免重复,并使用正确的语法。

: I learn English because it is an important language for communication worldwide. It helps me connect with people from different countries and is useful for my studies and career.

文法

Singular and plural issue

× Now I can speak three kinds of language, which is Chinese, English and French.

Now I can speak three kinds of languages, which are Chinese, English and French.

这里的“kinds of language”应使用复数形式“languages”,因为表示多种语言。谓语动词也应与复数主语一致,使用“are”。

Verb + -ing form

× I have learned a speaking English for almost, uh, almost 20 years.

I have learned to speak English for almost 20 years.

“learned a speaking English”结构不正确,动词“learn”后应接不定式“to speak”表示学习做某事。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I also prepared for a study aboard and, uh, if I go to the germ.

I also prepared to study abroad and, uh, if I go to Germany.

“prepared for a study aboard”应改为“prepared to study abroad”,表示准备去国外学习。“germ”应为“Germany”,是国家名。

Singular and plural issue

× I hope that I will learn about Japanese or Korean and Germany.

I hope that I will learn Japanese or Korean and German.

“Japanese”与“Korean”是语言或国籍形容词,不加“about”。“Germany”是国家名,形容词应为“German”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think learning English is a composer equals to Chinese or Chinese students.

I think learning English is comparable to Chinese for Chinese students.

“composer equals to”用法错误,应使用“comparable to”表示“可比较的”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think it's a, it's a, it's a practical, practical skill to communicate with foreigners with.

I think it's a practical skill to communicate with foreigners.

句尾多余的“with”应删除,且“practical”重复使用不当,保留一次即可。

重要語彙

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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