Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say: "I am a native Arabic speaker, and I also speak a little English and Spanish. These are the three languages I know."

例: I am a native Arabic speaker, and I also speak a little English and Spanish. These are the three languages I know.

提案: Improve your answer by making it more coherent and using linking words. Also, correct grammar and clarify your ideas. For example: "I think learning a new language is difficult for me, but it might be easier for others because everyone has different types of intelligence, and some people have a special ability for languages."

例: I think learning a new language is difficult for me, but it might be easier for others because everyone has different types of intelligence, and some people have a special ability for languages.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to explain your reasons. For example: "I don't plan to learn other languages besides the three I mentioned because I find learning new languages difficult."

例: I don't plan to learn other languages besides the three I mentioned because I find learning new languages difficult.

提案: Try to express your ideas more clearly and fluently. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and correct grammar. For example: "I learn English because my major and career require it. Although I don't like learning new languages, I feel forced to do so because of my career path."

例: I learn English because my major and career require it. Although I don't like learning new languages, I feel forced to do so because of my career path.

× And there are my three language that I speak.

✓ And there are my three languages that I speak.

The word 'language' should be plural 'languages' because it refers to three languages, which is a plural noun.

× For me I think it is more difficult to learn a new language but for someone else.

✓ For me, I think it is more difficult to learn a new language, but for someone else, it is easier.

The sentence lacks clarity and proper prepositions. Adding commas and completing the second clause improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It could be an easy mission becauses every one of us has a kind of intelligence and some people could have. Language Intelligence.

✓ It could be an easy mission because every one of us has a kind of intelligence, and some people have language intelligence.

The word 'becauses' is misspelled; 'because' is correct. Also, 'could have' is unnecessary here; 'have' is more appropriate to express possession.

× Besides the three that I have mentioned, I don't think so because as I said, I don't find the. Learning of knew language is a very simple thing for me.

✓ Besides the three that I have mentioned, I don't think so because, as I said, I don't find learning a new language a very simple thing for me.

The phrase 'Learning of knew language' is incorrect. It should be 'learning a new language'. Also, 'knew' is the past tense of 'know'; the correct adjective is 'new'.

× I learn English because, uh. Our major or my major and our career reqd that.

✓ I learn English because, uh, my major and our career require it.

The sentence is fragmented and uses 'reqd' which is incorrect. 'Require' is the correct verb, and the sentence should be complete.

× But I'm I think I'm forced to do to do it becauses the career path.

✓ But I think I'm forced to do it because of the career path.

The phrase 'becauses the career path' is incorrect. It should be 'because of the career path'. Also, 'to do to do' is repetitive and should be corrected to 'to do'.