Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks proper sentence structure. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, mention the languages you speak clearly and where you use them.

例: I can speak English, Punjabi, Hindi, and some Japanese. I use Punjabi and Hindi regularly with my family, while I practice Japanese at home to improve my skills.

提案: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid short, incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, learning a new language can be difficult at times because of different grammar and vocabulary. However, with regular practice and proper guidance, it becomes easier over time.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and proper sentence structure. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I plan to learn other languages in the future because they will benefit me. Moreover, learning new languages will improve my communication skills with people from different cultures.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Provide a clear reason with supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy.

例: I learn English because it offers many job opportunities. Additionally, it helps me improve my skills and gain more knowledge.

× I speak good T language is.

✓ I speak the T language well.

The adjective 'good' is incorrectly used to describe the verb 'speak'. The correct adverb form 'well' should be used to describe how the language is spoken. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect; 'the' article is needed before 'T language' and 'is' is unnecessary here.

× And I use regularly form folk and study is.

✓ And I use it regularly for folk and study purposes.

The preposition 'form' is incorrect; it should be 'for' to indicate purpose. Also, the sentence lacks clarity and proper structure; adding 'it' and 'purposes' clarifies the meaning.

× English, Punjabi and Hindi.

✓ I speak English, Punjabi, and Hindi.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and subject. Adding 'I speak' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× In Japanese using regular at home.

✓ I use Japanese regularly at home.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary here, and the verb form is incorrect. The correct sentence uses 'use' as the verb and places 'regularly' appropriately.

× They are difficult languages.

✓ They are difficult languages to learn.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'to learn' specifies what is difficult about the languages.

× 2. Learn. But.

✓ Learning is difficult sometimes, but...

The original is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting it as a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes we are learn properly and time to time they are not difficult for us.

✓ Sometimes we learn properly, and over time, they are not difficult for us.

The auxiliary verb 'are' is incorrectly used with 'learn'. Also, 'time to time' should be 'over time' for correct expression.

× Yes, I learn other language in future be 'cause they have benefit for me and it is improved to me in.

✓ Yes, I will learn other languages in the future because they will benefit me and improve my communication skills.

The present tense 'learn' is incorrect for future intention; 'will learn' is appropriate. 'Be 'cause' should be 'because'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'communication skills' clarifies the meaning.

× In communication with other peoples.

✓ In communication with other people.

The plural 'peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the correct plural form when referring to persons collectively.

× And they have.

✓ And they have benefits.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'benefits' completes the thought.

× Because I learn English.

✓ Because I am learning English.

The present continuous tense 'am learning' is more appropriate to express ongoing action.

× Because.

✓ Because it has many options for jobs,

The sentence fragment 'Because.' is incomplete. Completing it with a subject and verb clarifies the reason.

× They have many options for jobs and they improve.

✓ English offers many job opportunities and improves skills.

The pronoun 'they' is unclear; specifying 'English' clarifies the subject. Also, 'improve' needs an object; adding 'skills' completes the meaning.

× Skills and the knowledge me.

✓ my skills and knowledge.

The phrase is ungrammatical; 'the knowledge me' should be 'my knowledge' to correctly show possession.