Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do hoặc chi tiết hỗ trợ bằng cách sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I can speak two languages. My mother tongue is Vietnamese, and I have been learning English for several years because it offers many benefits for my future career and communication.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lộn xộn và thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng từ nối để bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, ví dụ như lý do tại sao học ngôn ngữ mới khó khăn.

例: Yes, I think learning a new language is quite difficult. For example, I have been studying English for two years, but I still find it hard to speak comfortably with native speakers.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng có hay không, sau đó giải thích lý do hoặc kế hoạch cụ thể bằng cách sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I want to focus on improving my English first because it is very important for my future. However, I might learn other languages later to challenge myself.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp lý do học tiếng Anh, sử dụng câu chủ đề và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: I learn English because I enjoy it and it helps me communicate with native speakers. Since I was a child, I have wanted to speak English fluently to feel more confident and relaxed.

× I can speak two language.

✓ I can speak two languages.

The noun 'language' should be plural 'languages' because it refers to more than one language. In English, countable nouns require plural form when the quantity is more than one.

× The one is my model language an.

✓ One is my mother tongue.

The phrase 'model language an' is incorrect and unclear. The correct term is 'mother tongue' to refer to the first language. Also, 'The one' should be 'One' or 'The first one' for clarity.

× English E is second man which for me 'cause I want to learn English because this have a ring a lot of benefits of our future.

✓ English is the second one for me because I want to learn it as it has a lot of benefits for our future.

The sentence has unclear pronouns and incorrect expressions. 'English E is second man' is incorrect; it should be 'English is the second one'. 'this have a ring a lot of benefits' is incorrect; it should be 'it has a lot of benefits'. Also, 'which for me' is unnecessary and confusing.

× Yes, I think it is quite difficult to learn any language by Semrau English either language I I have been learning forward two years and I can also use it the way for mainly because I'm is so is so difficult to speak comfort table with a native speaker.

✓ Yes, I think it is quite difficult to learn any language, including English. I have been learning it for two years and can use it somewhat, mainly because it is very difficult to speak comfortably with a native speaker.

The sentence contains many unclear and incorrect pronouns and phrases. 'by Semrau English either language' is unclear and incorrect. 'I I have been learning forward two years' should be 'I have been learning it for two years'. 'I'm is so is so difficult' is incorrect; it should be 'it is very difficult'. 'comfort table' should be 'comfortably'.

× I think I'm. I want because I English is. Is the. Is the only rule for myself and for my future too.

✓ I think I want to learn because English is the only rule for myself and for my future too.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect pronouns and structure. 'I think I'm.' is incomplete. 'I want because I English is.' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to learn because English is'. 'Is the only rule' is unclear; possibly 'is the only rule' should be 'is the only rule I follow' or 'is very important'.

× And I still fight challenge to myself from now on.

✓ And I still challenge myself from now on.

The phrase 'fight challenge to myself' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'challenge myself' to indicate self-improvement or self-motivation.

× Well, to be haunted.

✓ Well, to be honest.

The phrase 'to be haunted' is incorrect and does not fit the context. The correct phrase is 'to be honest' to express sincerity.

× So I really enjoy learning English.

✓ So, I really enjoy learning English.

Adding a comma after 'So' improves sentence clarity and flow.

× As a child, I.

✓ As a child, I enjoyed learning English.

The sentence is incomplete. It needs a verb and object to be complete. Adding 'enjoyed learning English' completes the thought.

× Are you still want English are on the way speak speaking with a native speaker I use is so comfortable.

✓ I still want to learn English and am on the way to speaking with a native speaker. I feel so comfortable using it.

The sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Are you still want English' should be 'I still want to learn English'. 'are on the way speak speaking' should be 'am on the way to speaking'. 'I use is so comfortable' should be 'I feel so comfortable using it'.

× Anne Anne relax.

✓ And I feel relaxed.

The phrase 'Anne Anne relax' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'And I feel relaxed' to express comfort and ease.