Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va so'z tanlashdagi noaniqliklarni tuzatishingiz kerak. Masalan, "Russia" o'rniga "Russian" so'zini ishlating va gaplarni qisqaroq, aniqroq qiling. Shuningdek, "My first language it was bake" jumlasini tushunish qiyin, uni "My first language is Uzbek" deb o'zgartiring.

例: I can speak three languages: Uzbek, which is my native language, Russian, and English. My first language is Uzbek, and I also enjoy speaking Russian and English.

提案: Javobingizni yanada aniq va grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri qilish uchun gaplarni qisqartiring va bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, "because" so'zini to'liq yozing va takroriy so'zlarni olib tashlang.

例: Yes, learning a new language is very difficult for everyone because nothing valuable comes without challenges. However, if you try hard, you can always achieve something.

提案: Javobingizda grammatik xatolarni tuzating va gaplarni aniqroq qiling. Masalan, "a Korean language" o'rniga "Korean" deb ayting va "I owe" so'zini tushunarsiz, uni olib tashlang yoki o'zgartiring.

例: Yes, I want to learn Korean in the future because I want to travel there. This way, I won't need a translator or ask someone else to translate for me.

提案: Javobingizni grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri va aniqroq qilish uchun gaplarni qisqartiring va takroriy so'zlarni olib tashlang. Masalan, "Because it needs to my study" o'rniga "Because I need it for my studies" deb ayting.

例: I learn English because I need it for my studies. Although it is difficult, I find English very interesting and I enjoy learning it.

× I can speak English, Russia and Uzbek, my native.

✓ I can speak English, Russian, and Uzbek, my native language.

The word 'Russia' is a noun referring to a country, but here it should be the adjective 'Russian' to describe the language. Also, 'language' is missing after 'native' to clarify the meaning.

× My first language it was bake and my second language is English.

✓ My first language was Uzbek and my second language is English.

The sentence has unnecessary words and incorrect verb usage. 'It was bake' is incorrect; it should be 'was Uzbek' to clearly state the first language.

× My favorite language are Russia English.

✓ My favorite languages are Russian and English.

The subject is plural ('languages'), so the verb should be 'are'. Also, 'Russia English' is incorrect; it should be 'Russian and English'.

× Yes, learning new language of very difficult to all to all people be 'cause nothing without a challenging, nothing without difficult an you can you always try hard and you always reach something.

✓ Yes, learning a new language is very difficult for all people because nothing is without challenge, nothing is without difficulty, and you can always try hard and always achieve something.

Missing articles ('a new language'), incorrect verb forms ('is' instead of 'of'), and incorrect prepositions ('for all people'). Also, 'challenging' should be 'challenge' and 'difficult' should be 'difficulty' as nouns.

× Yes, I want to learn other language in the future like a Korean language be 'cause I want to go to there to travel and I owe.

✓ Yes, I want to learn another language in the future, like Korean, because I want to travel there and I owe.

'Other language' should be 'another language' for singular countable noun. 'Like a Korean language' is incorrect; it should be 'like Korean'. 'Go to there' should be 'travel there'. The phrase 'I owe' is unclear and may be incomplete.

× I want to go to there to travel and I owe.

✓ I want to travel there and I owe.

The preposition 'to' before 'there' is unnecessary; 'travel there' is correct. The phrase 'I owe' is unclear and may need clarification.

× Because it needs to my study and I want it to learn and English is very interesting for me to learn.

✓ Because I need it for my studies and I want to learn it, and English is very interesting for me to learn.

Incorrect prepositions: 'needs to my study' should be 'need it for my studies'. Also, 'I want it to learn' should be 'I want to learn it'.

× It is very difficult but I love it becaused English is very interesting.

✓ It is very difficult but I love it because English is very interesting.

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; the correct word is 'because' which is a conjunction, not a past tense verb.