Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks a direct response. Try to clearly state which languages you speak and avoid filler words. Use a simple, direct sentence followed by a brief explanation if needed.

例: I speak Urdu and Punjabi, which are common languages in Pakistan. These are the languages I use most often in my daily life.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat confusing and repetitive. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain why it is difficult, providing specific reasons.

例: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult, especially if it is very different from my native language. For example, since I speak Urdu and Punjabi, learning a language like Chinese would be challenging because of the different sounds and grammar.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: It depends on the situation. If learning a new language is useful for my job or personal growth, I will definitely try to learn it. However, if it is not necessary, I might not make the effort.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and try to be more specific about the reasons.

例: I learn English because it is an international language used worldwide. Moreover, it is essential for communication on social media and in professional environments, which makes it very important in today's world.

× Like I'm from Pakistan so Pakistan local languages or do I mostly speak or two?

✓ Like I'm from Pakistan, so I mostly speak one or two local languages.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'languages or do I mostly speak or two' which is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the number of languages spoken and uses the singular 'one or two' to match the intended meaning. This addresses the singular and plural issue by correctly quantifying the languages.

× Yes, it is difficult to learn a new language which is not similar to my local language like I usually speak or two because my language is good too, that's why it is difficult to learn other language.

✓ Yes, it is difficult to learn a new language which is not similar to my local language, like the ones I usually speak, because my language is good too; that's why it is difficult to learn other languages.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and articles, making it confusing. 'Like I usually speak or two' is unclear and 'other language' should be plural 'other languages' to match the context. The correction improves preposition use and article placement, clarifying the meaning and fixing singular/plural agreement.

× It depends like. If I wanted to learn for something new and something for my specific work, so I will definitely learn different language in future.

✓ It depends. If I want to learn something new and something for my specific work, I will definitely learn a different language in the future.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'wanted' (past tense) with 'will' (future), causing tense inconsistency. Also, 'learn for something' is incorrect; 'learn something' is correct. The correction uses the modal verb 'will' appropriately with the present tense 'want' to express future intention, fixing modal verb usage and tense consistency.

× But if it was not specific or not important for me that then I will not lie.

✓ But if it is not specific or not important for me, then I will not learn.

The original sentence uses 'was' (past tense) incorrectly when referring to a future or general condition. Also, 'I will not lie' is incorrect in context; it should be 'I will not learn.' The correction uses present tense 'is' for the condition and corrects the verb to 'learn,' fixing past tense misuse and verb choice.

× Because English is international language, everyone learns English and it is important part of our lives nowadays, because of social media, because of in professional works, everyone uses English language.

✓ Because English is an international language, everyone learns English and it is an important part of our lives nowadays. Because of social media and professional work, everyone uses the English language.

The original sentence omits necessary articles 'an' before 'international language' and 'an' before 'important part.' It also misuses prepositions and articles in 'because of in professional works.' The correction adds the correct articles and improves preposition use, fixing article errors and improving sentence clarity.