Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response to the question, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, correct grammar mistakes and use appropriate vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

例: I can speak Georgian, which is my native language. I also study English because I want to improve it. Additionally, I have learned some German and Russian, but I am more interested in English than Russian.

提案: Your answer is too short and lacks supporting details. Try to give reasons or examples to explain your opinion, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I think it is difficult to learn a new language here because there are not many opportunities to practice speaking with native speakers. However, with enough effort and practice, it is possible to improve.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your intentions clearly, use linking words, and provide specific details about your language learning plans.

例: In the future, I want to focus on improving my English skills. I am also interested in learning Spanish, but for now, English is my priority because it is very useful.

提案: Your answer should be more organized and use better vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why English is important to you with specific reasons.

例: I learn English because it is a global language that many people speak. Knowing English helps me communicate with others and opens up more opportunities for work and study.

× My child childhood language is Georgian.

✓ My childhood language is Georgian.

The phrase 'child childhood language' is incorrect because 'child' is unnecessary and causes redundancy. The correct phrase is 'My childhood language' to indicate the language spoken during childhood.

× I wanted to speak English well.

✓ I want to speak English well.

The sentence uses past tense 'wanted' but the context suggests a present desire. Using present tense 'want' is appropriate to express current intention.

× I learn German and Russian, but I don't interesting Russian.

✓ I learn German and Russian, but I am not interested in Russian.

The phrase 'I don't interesting Russian' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'I am not interested in Russian' using the verb 'to be' with the adjective 'interested' and the preposition 'in'.

× I think it's difficult to learn a new language here.

✓ I think it's difficult to learn a new language here.

This sentence is grammatically correct and uses the present tense appropriately to express a current opinion.

× Now I want to order English in future.

✓ Now I want to learn English in the future.

The phrase 'want to order English' is incorrect; 'order' should be replaced with 'learn' to express the intention to study English. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' with the definite article.

× I don't know I like Spanish to learn but it's the time as this time I want to learn English.

✓ I don't know if I like to learn Spanish, but at this time I want to learn English.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper conjunctions and prepositions. Adding 'if' after 'I don't know' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Everyone knows English, someone little bit, someone very good and I want to learn because it's very important language.

✓ Everyone knows English, some a little bit, some very well, and I want to learn it because it's a very important language.

The pronouns 'someone' should be 'some' to refer to people in general. Also, 'little bit' should be 'a little bit', and 'very good' should be 'very well' to correctly describe ability. Adding 'it' after 'learn' clarifies the object, and 'a' before 'very important language' is necessary.