Language— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What languages can you speak?
受験者
Oh, I can speak English, Mandarin and Cantonese. Most people see Mandarin and Cantonese are the same language, but actually they have different sounds. So I think I can speak at least three languages.
試験官
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
受験者
Of course it is difficult, like when I want to learn the pronunciation of like Spanish. Yes, a completely different language. I find myself difficult to follow their sound, the shape of the mouth is so hard to imitate. So I don't think it's an easy job to learn a new language.
試験官
Will you learn other languages in the future?
受験者
I would learn other language when it is necessary, like when I want to travel to another country, I will learn the basic conversations. Yes, like Japanese because Japanese is quite similar to the Chinese. Yes, it makes me feel easier to master the new language and it has a history background. OK.
試験官
Why do you learn English?
受験者
I learn English because this is the subject we have to learn in school, and gradually I found myself interesting in English and find myself better in speaking English than my other classmates. So I spend more and more time learning English and try to have a higher level of speaking, writing, reading, et cetera, so I can teach my child in the future.
評価
総合
Part 1
What languages can you speak?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答时应避免重复和冗长，语言表达更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地说明会说的语言，并用恰当的连接词衔接观点。
例: I can speak English, Mandarin, and Cantonese. Although many people think Mandarin and Cantonese are the same, they actually have different pronunciations, so I consider them as separate languages.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中应避免重复和语法错误，使用连贯的句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容更连贯。
例: Yes, learning a new language is definitely challenging. For example, when I tried to learn Spanish, I found it hard to imitate the pronunciation because the mouth shapes are very different from my native languages.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答应更连贯，避免重复“yes”，并且句子结构应更完整，使用连接词使表达更自然。
例: I would learn another language if necessary, such as when I travel abroad. For instance, I might learn basic Japanese because it is similar to Chinese, which would make it easier for me to master.
Why do you learn English?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中应注意语法准确性，避免重复表达，句子应更简洁且逻辑清晰。
例: I learn English because it is a required subject at school. Over time, I became interested in it and improved my skills, especially speaking. Now, I spend more time studying English to reach a higher level so that I can teach my child in the future.
文法
× I would learn other language when it is necessary, like when I want to travel to another country, I will learn the basic conversations.
✓ I would learn other languages when it is necessary, like when I want to travel to another country, I will learn the basic conversations.
这里的“other language”应为复数形式“other languages”，因为表示不止一种语言。英语中表示多种语言时应使用复数形式。
× I learn English because this is the subject we have to learn in school, and gradually I found myself interesting in English and find myself better in speaking English than my other classmates.
✓ I learn English because this is the subject we have to learn in school, and gradually I found myself interested in English and find myself better at speaking English than my other classmates.
这里“interesting”应改为“interested”，因为“interested”表示感兴趣的状态，是形容词用法；“interesting”表示令人感兴趣的特性。
× I learn English because this is the subject we have to learn in school, and gradually I found myself interesting in English and find myself better in speaking English than my other classmates.
✓ I learn English because this is the subject we have to learn in school, and gradually I found myself interested in English and find myself better at speaking English than my other classmates.
“better in speaking English”中的介词应为“at”，表示擅长某事，正确搭配是“better at”。
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