Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn về cách bạn sử dụng tiếng Anh trong công việc và giao tiếp xã hội.

例: I can speak English fluently as it is my second language. I use it daily for both work and social interactions, which helps me improve continuously. Additionally, mastering English opens up better career opportunities for me in the future.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đầy đủ nhưng câu trả lời có thể tự nhiên hơn bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cụ thể hơn về những khó khăn bạn gặp phải hoặc người khác thường gặp khi học ngôn ngữ mới.

例: Honestly, learning a new language is very important in our lives. However, it can be quite challenging because it requires mastering vocabulary, grammar, pronunciation, and understanding cultural nuances, which can be difficult for many learners.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên sửa lỗi và làm câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Absolutely, if I have the chance, I would like to learn English since it is a global language spoken in many countries. Moreover, it would help me communicate with people from different cultures and make new friends more easily.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên chú ý cấu trúc câu, tránh lỗi chính tả và sử dụng từ phù hợp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn về lý do bạn học tiếng Anh.

例: In my opinion, English is an official language in many countries, so it is useful for various purposes like making new friends and communicating with people worldwide. Additionally, learning English can improve my career opportunities in the future.

× Moreover, speaking English can advance my career opportunity in the future.

✓ Moreover, speaking English can advance my career opportunities in the future.

The word 'opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities' because it refers to multiple potential chances or possibilities in a career, not just one. Using the plural form is more natural and accurate in this context.

× ...it has become a global language spoken in many country around the world.

✓ ...it has become a global language spoken in many countries around the world.

The noun 'country' should be plural 'countries' because it refers to multiple nations around the world. Using the singular form is incorrect when referring to more than one.

× Moreover, speaking English would help me communicate with people from different culture and make new friends more easily.

✓ Moreover, speaking English would help me communicate with people from different cultures and make new friends more easily.

The noun 'culture' should be plural 'cultures' because it refers to various cultural backgrounds. Using the singular form is incorrect when referring to multiple cultures.

× In my opinion, English has become an official language in many country.

✓ In my opinion, English has become an official language in many countries.

The noun 'country' should be plural 'countries' because it refers to multiple nations. Using the singular form is incorrect when referring to more than one.

× Therefore, eternity for many purposes such as making new friends or communicating with people from across the country.

✓ Therefore, it is necessary for many purposes such as making new friends or communicating with people from across the country.

The original sentence lacks a verb and is incomplete, making it a sentence structure error. Adding 'it is necessary' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.