Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and focus on directly answering the question with clear supporting details. For example, mention the languages you speak and briefly explain why or how you learned them, using linking words to connect ideas.

例: I can speak Punjabi and Hindi because I grew up in Punjab, India, where these languages are commonly spoken. Punjabi is the regional language, while Hindi is the national language of India. Additionally, I have learned English fluently through my education.

提案: Improve your answer by completing your sentences and using correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Be specific about the difficulties and explain them clearly without leaving sentences incomplete.

例: Yes, I believe learning a new language can be challenging. For instance, when I tried to learn French last year, I couldn't continue because I lacked enough time to practice regularly. Moreover, learning a language requires patience and consistent effort.

提案: Make your answer more fluent by using correct tenses and linking words. Avoid repeating similar ideas and be concise. Clearly state your plans and reasons for learning French, linking your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I plan to learn French in the future. Previously, I couldn't start because of time constraints. However, once I have enough time, I will focus on learning French since it is important for building a career here in Canada.

提案: Complete your sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Be specific about the benefits of learning English and express your ideas clearly and naturally.

例: I learn English because it is a globally accepted language. When communicating with people from different countries, English serves as a common language. Therefore, by learning English, I can travel easily, enjoy new experiences, and learn about various cultures.

× I learned the two basic language of their daddy's Punjabi and Hindi.

✓ I learned the two basic languages of my daddy's Punjabi and Hindi.

The word 'language' should be plural 'languages' because it refers to two languages, Punjabi and Hindi. Also, 'their daddy's' is incorrect; it should be 'my daddy's' to indicate possession correctly.

× Punjabi is a national language of the street Punjab and Hindi is our national language of India.

✓ Punjabi is a national language of the state of Punjab and Hindi is our national language of India.

The word 'street' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'state' to refer to the region Punjab. Also, 'of the state Punjab' is clearer than 'of the street Punjab'.

× Along with it I'm able to speak the English very fluently.

✓ Along with it, I'm able to speak English very fluently.

The article 'the' before 'English' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'English' as a language name does not require 'the'. Also, a comma after 'Along with it' improves clarity.

× learning a new language require a lot of patience and the time so which can be.

✓ learning a new language requires a lot of patience and time, which can be challenging.

The verb 'require' should be 'requires' to agree with the singular subject 'learning a new language'. Also, the phrase 'the time so which can be' is unclear and corrected to 'time, which can be challenging' for clarity.

× Earlier when I decided to do so, I was also not able to do due to the shortage of the time.

✓ Earlier, when I decided to do so, I was also not able to because of the shortage of time.

The phrase 'due to the shortage of the time' is better expressed as 'because of the shortage of time'. Also, 'do' is vague; the sentence is corrected for clarity and proper past tense usage.

× But whenever I will get time in the future, I have decided to learn French as that is very important.

✓ But whenever I get time in the future, I have decided to learn French as that is very important.

In conditional clauses starting with 'whenever', the present simple tense 'get' is used instead of 'will get'. The future tense 'will get' is incorrect here.

× Whenever we have to talk with the the person from any other background or from other nation, English is a common language.

✓ Whenever we have to talk with a person from any other background or from another nation, English is a common language.

The phrase 'the the person' has a repeated article; it should be 'a person'. Also, 'other nation' should be 'another nation' for correct usage.

× I can talk with different peoples and get to know about their cultures and.

✓ I can talk with different people and get to know about their cultures.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the correct plural form when referring to persons. Also, the sentence was incomplete and is corrected to a complete sentence.