Language— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What languages can you speak?
受験者
I am a native speaker of Chinese, and since I was born and raised in Shanghai, I am also fluent in the Shanghai dialect, which I often use when talking with my family and friends. In addition, I have been learning English for almost 9 years, so I'm quite proficient and can communicate effectively in both spoken and written forms. This combination of languages allows me to connect with.
試験官
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
受験者
Of course, I think learning a new language is quite challenging because it requires consistent effort and time to build up vocabulary and grammar skills. In addition, understanding the cultural background of the language is essential, as it helps to communicate more naturally and avoid misunderstandings. Overall, mastering a new language demands patience and dedication, which is difficult.
試験官
Will you learn other languages in the future?
受験者
I am planning to learn Japanese in the future because its pronunciation is quite similar to the Shanghai dialect, which I think will make it easier for me to pick up. Additionally, I have a strong interest in Japanese pop culture, especially music and TV shows, so mastering the language will help me communicate better with my favorite artist and understand their work more deeply.
試験官
Why do you learn English?
受験者
First of all, English is the most widely spoken language globally, so being proficient in it enables me to communicate easily when I travel or meet people from different cultural backgrounds. Additionally, my middle school English teacher was a great mentor who made learning enjoyable by using interesting stories and idioms, which motivated me to improve my skills.
評価
総合
Part 1
What languages can you speak?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答较为完整且自然，但最后一句话未完整表达，建议避免句子未完结，且可适当简化表达，使答案更流畅。
例: I am a native Chinese speaker and fluent in the Shanghai dialect, which I use with my family and friends. Additionally, I have studied English for nearly nine years and can communicate well in both speaking and writing.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
スコア: 90.0提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但结尾“which is difficult”表达略显重复，建议用更丰富的词汇替换，提升表达多样性。
例: Yes, learning a new language is challenging because it takes time and consistent effort to improve vocabulary and grammar. Moreover, grasping the culture behind the language is important for natural communication and avoiding misunderstandings. Therefore, it requires a lot of patience and commitment.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
スコア: 95.0提案: 回答内容丰富且逻辑清晰，使用了连接词，表达自然。建议注意避免句子过长，适当分句使表达更清晰。
例: I plan to learn Japanese because its pronunciation is similar to the Shanghai dialect, which should make learning easier. Also, I enjoy Japanese pop culture, especially music and TV shows, so knowing the language will help me communicate with my favorite artists and understand their work better.
Why do you learn English?
スコア: 95.0提案: 回答内容具体且有个人色彩，结构合理。建议在表达时可适当使用更多同义词替换“English”或“learning”，使语言更丰富。
例: I learn English because it is the most widely spoken language worldwide, allowing me to communicate easily during travel or with people from various cultures. Moreover, my middle school English teacher inspired me by using engaging stories and idioms, which encouraged me to enhance my skills.
文法
× This combination of languages allows me to connect with.
✓ This combination of languages allows me to connect with others.
句子缺少宾语，导致结构不完整。应补充宾语“others”使句子完整。
× which is difficult.
✓ which is difficult to do.
句子中“which is difficult”缺少动词短语，表达不完整。应补充“to do”使句意明确。
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