Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dil bilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışmalısınız. Ayrıca, dil seviyenizi belirtirken daha net ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız.

例: I can speak three languages: Turkish, English, and German. My favorite language is definitely English, and I have an A1 certificate in it.

提案: Cümleniz biraz karışık ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha iyi ifade edebilirsiniz.

例: No, I don't think it's difficult. It might become harder as you get older because the brain learns more slowly. However, if you really want to learn and practice, you can definitely succeed.

提案: Cevabınızda konu dışına çıkma ve tekrarlar var. Daha düzenli ve net cümleler kurarak, hangi dilleri öğrenmek istediğinizi açıkça belirtmelisiniz.

例: Yes, definitely. When I go to university, I want to learn Italian, German, and French. Actually, my favorite language is Russian.

提案: Cümleniz kısa ve basit. Daha fazla detay vererek neden İngilizce öğrenmek istediğinizi açıklayabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, daha resmi ifadeler kullanmaya çalışın.

例: I learn English because I want to become a translator. Also, I find English relatively easy to learn compared to other languages.

× You speak I can I can speak three language, Turkish, English and German.

✓ I can speak three languages: Turkish, English, and German.

The word 'language' should be plural 'languages' because it refers to more than one language. In English, countable nouns must agree in number with their quantity.

× My favorite language is English absolutely and I have AC 1° in it.

✓ My favorite language is absolutely English, and I have an A1 certificate in it.

The adverb 'absolutely' should be placed before the adjective 'English' for correct emphasis. Also, 'AC 1°' is unclear; likely intended as 'A1 certificate' which is the correct term for language proficiency levels. The article 'an' is needed before 'A1 certificate'.

× When you get older it's maybe gets harder, but it's normal because your brain getting to learn hard.

✓ When you get older, it maybe gets harder, but it's normal because your brain finds it harder to learn.

The phrase 'it's maybe gets harder' is incorrect; 'maybe' should precede 'gets' without 'it's'. Also, 'your brain getting to learn hard' is ungrammatical; it should be 'your brain finds it harder to learn' to express the idea properly.

× Absolutely no ma, you just have to want it.

✓ Absolutely not, man, you just have to want it.

'No ma' is incorrect; likely intended as 'no man' or 'not, man'. The phrase 'Absolutely not, man' is a common colloquial expression. Pronoun usage here is incorrect and needs correction for clarity.

× And if you want it and you try it, absolutely you will learn English languages.

✓ And if you want it and you try, absolutely you will learn English.

'English languages' is incorrect because 'English' is a singular language. The plural 'languages' is unnecessary here. Also, 'try it' can be simplified to 'try' for naturalness.

× When I go to university, I wanna learn Italian and Deutsch.

✓ When I go to university, I want to learn Italian and German.

'Wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech. Also, 'Deutsch' is the German word for 'German'; in English, 'German' should be used.

× Deutsch, Sorry. And French? Yes.

✓ German, sorry. And French? Yes.

'Deutsch' is the German word for 'German'; in English, the language name should be 'German'. Also, 'Sorry' should be lowercase and connected properly in the sentence.

× My favorite language is actually it's Russian. Yes.

✓ Actually, my favorite language is Russian. Yes.

The phrase 'is actually it's Russian' is incorrect; 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' and is unnecessary here. The correct structure is 'my favorite language is Russian'.

× I learn English because I wanna be a translator and it's so easy to learn it.

✓ I learn English because I want to be a translator, and it's so easy to learn.

'Wanna' should be replaced with 'want to' for proper grammar. Also, 'learn it' is redundant after 'easy to learn'; 'learn' alone suffices.