Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: La risposta è un po' lunga e contiene errori grammaticali e di scelta lessicale. Per migliorare, cerca di essere più conciso e usa parole corrette per i nomi delle lingue (ad esempio, 'French' invece di 'France'). Inoltre, evita ripetizioni e usa frasi più naturali.

例: I speak Italian as my first language and some English, which I have studied at school. I would like to improve my English and also learn new languages such as French and Arabic.

提案: La risposta presenta errori grammaticali e lessicali, come 'earn the confidence' invece di 'gain confidence'. Inoltre, la frase è un po' lunga e poco chiara. Per migliorare, usa strutture più semplici e corrette e collega le idee con connettivi appropriati.

例: I think the most difficult part of learning a new language is grammar. Also, because I am shy, I find it hard to gain confidence when speaking, which makes practicing challenging.

提案: La risposta contiene errori di grammatica e lessico, come 'Spain' invece di 'Spanish' e mancanza di articoli. Inoltre, la frase finale è incompleta. Per migliorare, usa la forma corretta degli aggettivi e completa le frasi in modo chiaro.

例: In the future, I would like to learn French, Spanish, and Arabic because I have always been interested in other cultures and languages.

提案: La risposta è abbastanza chiara ma può essere migliorata eliminando espressioni colloquiali come 'it's like' e usando strutture più formali. Inoltre, collega meglio le idee per rendere la risposta più fluida.

例: Nowadays, I think learning English is essential because it is a language that many people can speak and understand. Additionally, I enjoy learning new languages for personal interest.

× I can speak Italian which is my first language and then I can speak also a bit of English because I always study English at school.

✓ I can speak Italian, which is my first language, and then I can also speak a bit of English because I always study English at school.

The placement of 'also' is incorrect; it should be placed before 'speak' to correctly modify the verb. Additionally, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity.

× But I would like also to well improve my English but also learning new languages like France, Arabic.

✓ But I would also like to improve my English well and also learn new languages like French and Arabic.

The phrase 'like France, Arabic' is incorrect; 'France' should be 'French' as an adjective for the language, and 'learning' should be 'learn' to maintain parallel structure. 'Well' should be placed after 'improve'.

× The most difficult part for me of learning new languages is the grammar and also earn the confidence to speak in other languages because I'm shy so I have a lot of tough moments while I'm practicing.

✓ The most difficult part for me in learning new languages is the grammar and also earning the confidence to speak in other languages because I'm shy, so I have a lot of tough moments while I'm practicing.

The phrase 'part for me of learning' should be 'part for me in learning'. Also, 'earn' should be 'earning' to match the gerund form after 'and also'. A comma is needed before 'so' to separate clauses.

× In the future I would like to learn French and Spain and also Arabic because I always been interested in other culture and also in other languages.

✓ In the future, I would like to learn French and Spanish and also Arabic because I have always been interested in other cultures and also in other languages.

'Spain' should be 'Spanish' to refer to the language. 'Always been' needs the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. 'Culture' should be plural 'cultures' to match 'other'. A comma after 'In the future' improves readability.

× Well, nowadays I think it is essential learning English because it's like the language that everybody can speak and can understand.

✓ Well, nowadays I think it is essential to learn English because it's the language that everybody can speak and understand.

The phrase 'essential learning English' is incorrect; it should be 'essential to learn English'. Also, 'like the language' is better as 'the language' for clarity and correctness.