Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“did less fluently”应为“am less fluent”。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，并避免冗余。

例: I can speak both Chinese and English. I am fluent in Chinese, but my English is less fluent. However, I am working hard to improve my English speaking skills.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，存在语法和用词错误，如“try aloud”应为“try out”或“practice speaking”。建议使用连贯的句子结构和恰当的连接词，具体说明学习语言的难点。

例: Yes, learning a new language is challenging because it requires changing the way we think. For example, pronunciation is difficult, so we need to practice speaking many times and spend a lot of time improving.

提案: 回答含糊且语法错误较多，如“may through may break”不明所以。建议明确表达意图，使用正确的词汇和句型，并避免重复和模糊表达。

例: I don't plan to learn another language soon, but I might change my mind in the future. If I do, I would like to learn Japanese or German.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“so as English myself”不合适。建议简洁明了地说明学习英语的原因，使用正确的时态和句子结构。

例: English is a compulsory subject in my country, so I started learning it when I was a child. Now, I find English very useful because it helps me communicate with people around the world.

× For Chinese I can speak it fluently, but I did less fluently in English.

✓ For Chinese, I can speak it fluently, but I speak English less fluently.

这里使用了过去时态'did'，但句子描述的是现在的能力，应使用一般现在时'speak'。

× I think I will try on to speak English better in the future.

✓ I think I will try to speak English better in the future.

短语'try on to'是不正确的，正确用法是'try to do something'，表示尝试做某事。

× learning a new language needs us to shift our mind and we should try aloud.

✓ learning a new language needs us to shift our mind and we should try aloud.

这里'aloud'（大声地）用法不当，应该是'out loud'，但句意应为'努力尝试'，建议改为'we should try hard'。

× I think I will not pick up another language in the future, but it may through may break.

✓ I think I will not pick up another language in the future, but maybe I will take a break.

'through may break'表达不清，可能是想说'maybe I will take a break'，即'也许我会休息一下'。

× I may choose the Japanese language or Germany to learn.

✓ I may choose to learn Japanese or German.

'choose the Japanese language or Germany to learn'结构不正确，应该用'choose to learn'加语言名称，且'Germany'应为形容词形式'German'。

× English is a compulsory course in our country so when I was a little kid I was taught English and from now on I found the English is really was really useful and can help us communicate with the world so as English myself.

✓ English is a compulsory course in our country, so when I was a little kid, I was taught English. From now on, I find English is really useful and can help us communicate with the world, so I study English myself.

句子结构混乱，时态不一致，重复使用'really'，需要分句并调整时态，使表达清晰流畅。