Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümlenizde dil seviyelerinizi belirtirken daha doğru ve doğal ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümle yapınızı basit ve anlaşılır tutmalısınız.

例: I am a native Turkish speaker. I have an upper-intermediate level in English and an intermediate level in German.

提案: Cümleniz genel olarak anlaşılır ancak daha doğal ve akıcı olması için bağlaçlar ve daha spesifik ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

例: I believe learning a new language requires discipline, good teachers, and high-quality education. With these, it becomes much easier to succeed.

提案: Dil seviyelerini belirtirken daha doğru terimler kullanmalı ve cümlenizi daha açık ve doğal hale getirmelisiniz.

例: In the future, I want to learn Japanese, French, German at A1 level, and Chinese.

提案: Cümleniz tekrarlamalar içeriyor ve anlamı net değil. Daha açık ve doğal ifadeler kullanmalısınız.

例: I learn English because I love languages and it helps me communicate and understand people from different cultures.

× I can speak Turkish as I native and English see 1 upper advanced and be 1 Deutsch intermediate.

✓ I can speak Turkish as a native, English at upper-intermediate level, and German at intermediate level.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and articles. 'I native' should be 'a native', and 'see 1 upper advanced' and 'be 1 Deutsch intermediate' are unclear and incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper articles and clearer expressions for language proficiency levels.

× I think you just need some discipline, some good teachers, high quality education and that's all how you can learn a new language.

✓ I think you just need some discipline, some good teachers, and high-quality education; that's all you need to learn a new language.

The original sentence incorrectly connects clauses with 'and that's all how you can learn'. The correction uses proper conjunctions and punctuation to separate ideas clearly and improve sentence structure.

× I want to learn Japanese, French, Deutsch as AC1 and Chinese.

✓ I want to learn Japanese, French, German at A1 level, and Chinese.

'Deutsch' should be 'German' in English, and 'as AC1' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' for language levels. The correction clarifies language names and proficiency levels with proper prepositions.

× Because I love learning languages, because how we communicate, how we can understand, how we can understand, how we can talk the other ones.

✓ Because I love learning languages and how we communicate, understand, and talk with others.

The original sentence is repetitive and lacks proper structure. The correction removes redundancy and connects ideas smoothly to form a coherent sentence.