Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语言表达较为自然，但存在冗余和语法错误，如“English is a national language”表达不准确。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用更准确的表达。

例: I can speak Chinese, English, and Japanese. Although I am not fluent in all of them, they are very useful in my daily life. For example, English helps me communicate when I travel abroad.

提案: 回答内容不够连贯，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且表达更具体。

例: Yes, learning a new language is definitely difficult. However, I believe that understanding the culture of that language can make the process easier and more interesting. For example, my teacher encouraged me to learn about cultural customs, which helped me a lot.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达未来计划，并说明原因。

例: Yes, I plan to continue learning Japanese because my current level is basic. I only know simple words and sentences, so I want to improve my skills.

提案: 回答较为完整，但时态使用不当，如“have learned”应为过去式。建议注意时态一致，并丰富细节。

例: I started learning English when I was a child. Since English is a global language, it is very useful for me in daily life. For instance, it helps me communicate with people from different countries when I travel.

× English is a national language, so it's really helped me to travel outside.

✓ English is a national language, so it has really helped me to travel abroad.

这里使用了缩写"it's"，实际上应为"it has"，表示现在完成时态，强调过去发生的动作对现在的影响。同时，"travel outside"表达不准确，应该用"travel abroad"表示出国旅行。

× But I think before a new language you should learn their culture first.

✓ But I think before learning a new language you should learn its culture first.

"before a new language"缺少动名词形式，应为"before learning a new language"。此外，"their culture"指代不明确，语言是单数，应使用"its culture"。

× Teacher helped me.

✓ The teacher helped me.

句子缺少冠词，英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词，应该加上"The"。

× I will go on the Japanese Japanese in the future because actually my Japanese is not really good.

✓ I will continue learning Japanese in the future because actually my Japanese is not really good.

"go on the Japanese Japanese"结构不正确，表达继续学习应使用"continue learning Japanese"。重复了"Japanese"，应删除多余部分。

× When I was a little kid, I have learned English.

✓ When I was a little kid, I learned English.

时间状语"When I was a little kid"指过去，句子应使用一般过去时，不能用现在完成时"have learned"。