Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了语言种类，但语言表达不够自然，且句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子，避免口语化的填充词，并且注意语法准确性。

例: I can speak Mandarin and English fluently. Additionally, I also speak the dialect of my hometown, which is different from Mandarin, so I consider myself to know three languages.

提案: 回答内容较为完整，表达了观点并给出例子，但句子衔接稍显生硬，建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅自然。

例: I think the difficulty of learning a new language depends on the language itself. For instance, Japanese shares some similarities with Mandarin, which makes it easier for me to learn vocabulary. However, languages with very different grammar and sounds can be quite challenging.

提案: 回答简洁且内容具体，表达了学习动机和目的，但可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, absolutely. I plan to learn Korean in the future because I really enjoy K-pop music and idols. By learning the language, I can better understand the lyrics and appreciate the culture more deeply.

提案: 回答内容丰富且结构清晰，使用了连接词，表达自然流畅。建议继续保持并尝试使用更多高级词汇。

例: I learn English for several reasons. Firstly, because it is spoken by many people worldwide, it allows me to communicate effectively with people from different countries. Moreover, I hope to work with international clients in the future, so having strong English skills is essential for my career.

× Well you know I can speak Mandarin and English, but if dialect can't, I guess I can speak 3 languages because I can also speak the dialect of my hometown which is different to Mandarin.

✓ Well, you know I can speak Mandarin and English, but if dialects can't, I guess I can speak 3 languages because I can also speak the dialect of my hometown which is different from Mandarin.

这里的"dialect"应该用复数形式"dialects"，因为前文提到的是多种方言。英语中，表示多种类别时需要用复数形式。

× ...which is different to Mandarin.

✓ ...which is different from Mandarin.

英语中表达“与……不同”时，正确的介词是"different from"，而不是"different to"。这是固定搭配。

× Well, I think it really depends on the language what you learn.

✓ Well, I think it really depends on the language that you learn.

这里缺少关系代词"that"，使句子结构完整。"depends on"后面应接名词性从句，需用"that"引导。

× ...which makes it easier for me to understand and remember vocabulary.

✓ ...which makes it easier for me to understand and remember vocabulary.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× Learning the language can help me understand the lyrics better and appreciate the culture more deeply.

✓ Learning the language can help me understand the lyrics better and appreciate the culture more deeply.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× There are several reasons why I learn English.

✓ There are several reasons why I learn English.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× Firstly, since English is spoken by many people worldwide, it helps me communicate effectively with people from different countries.

✓ Firstly, since English is spoken by many people worldwide, it helps me communicate effectively with people from different countries.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× In addition, I want to find a job that involves working with international clients, so having good English skills is essential for me.

✓ In addition, I want to find a job that involves working with international clients, so having good English skills is essential for me.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。