Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达，同时注意语法准确性。可以用更自然的表达方式介绍你会说的语言。

例: I usually speak Chinese, which is my native language. I also use English occasionally, especially during exams, but I'm still working on improving my speaking skills.

提案: 回答中表达不够流畅，语法和用词有误。建议使用连贯的句子，并用连接词使表达更自然。

例: Yes, learning English has been challenging for me because traditional teaching methods focus mainly on writing and exercises, neglecting speaking practice. However, I am determined to improve my English skills in the future.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，建议注意句子结构完整，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I look forward to learning a new language like Korean because I am interested in Korean culture, and I hope to speak it fluently in the future.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议用更准确的表达方式，并避免重复，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: To be honest, one of the main reasons I learn English is because I want to study abroad. Therefore, I need to improve my speaking skills since English is essential for communication.

× It's my mother language and and sometimes I also use English in my exam but I'm not good at speaking.

✓ It's my mother tongue and sometimes I also use English in my exam but I'm not good at speaking.

“mother language”应改为“mother tongue”，因为“mother tongue”是固定搭配，表示母语。

× It's my mother language and and sometimes I also use English in my exam but I'm not good at speaking.

✓ It's my mother tongue and sometimes I also use English in my exam, but I'm not good at speaking.

句中“and and”重复，应去掉一个“and”；另外，连接两个独立分句时，逗号应放在“but”前。

× Yes, I've encountered many difficulties in learning English because in our traditional teacher we focus on writing and doing some exercise, so we neglect speaking.

✓ Yes, I've encountered many difficulties in learning English because in our traditional teaching, we focus on writing and doing some exercises, so we neglect speaking.

“in our traditional teacher”应改为“in our traditional teaching”，因为这里指的是教学方式；“exercise”应为复数“exercises”，表示多项练习。

× Yes, I'm looking forward to learn a new language like Korean because I.

✓ Yes, I'm looking forward to learning a new language like Korean because I am interested in Korean culture.

“look forward to”后应接动名词形式“learning”，而不是动词原形“learn”。

× Yes, I'm looking forward to learn a new language like Korean because I. I'm interested in Korean culture and I want to I can speak fluently in the future.

✓ Yes, I'm looking forward to learning a new language like Korean because I am interested in Korean culture and I want to be able to speak fluently in the future.

句子结构不完整且重复，应补全并调整为正确表达。

× To be honest, one of the main reason to learn English is I want to study abroad.

✓ To be honest, one of the main reasons to learn English is that I want to study abroad.

“one of the main reason”应为“one of the main reasons”，因为“one of”后面接复数名词。

× It's a way to communicate with each others.

✓ It's a way to communicate with each other.

“each others”错误，正确用法是“each other”，表示彼此。