Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dil isimlerini belirtirken daha net ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümle yapılarınızı basit ve anlaşılır tutarak, gereksiz tekrar ve karmaşıklıktan kaçının. İzlediğiniz dizilerden bahsederken, neden bu dizilerin dil becerilerinizi geliştirdiğini daha açık ifade edin.

例: I can speak three languages: Turkish, which is my native language, English at a C1 level, and German. I enjoy learning languages because it helps me understand different cultures. To improve my English, I often watch TV shows like Doctor House and Dexter, which help me learn new vocabulary and expressions.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları var ve ifadeler biraz karışık. Daha akıcı ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, görüşünüzü desteklemek için daha spesifik nedenler veya örnekler ekleyebilirsiniz.

例: I don't think learning a new language is difficult because understanding the culture and common vocabulary makes it easier. I believe that with enough effort, anyone can learn a new language successfully.

提案: Cevabınızda tekrarlar var ve bazı ifadeler gayri resmi. Daha resmi ve akıcı ifadeler kullanarak, planlarınızı daha net açıklayın. Ayrıca, dil seviyeniz ve hedefleriniz hakkında daha düzenli bilgi verin.

例: Yes, I plan to learn more languages in the future because I enjoy it. Currently, I have a B1 level in German and I aim to reach C1. Besides German, I would also like to learn French, Italian, and Chinese.

提案: Cümlenizde anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade etmeye çalışın. Ayrıca, neden İngilizce öğrendiğinizi daha detaylı açıklayın.

例: I learn English because I believe that learning a new language helps you develop a new personality. I want to become a translator in the future, so improving my English is very important to me.

× I can speak three language Turkish, native English, C1 and German.

✓ I can speak three languages: Turkish, native English, C1, and German.

The word 'language' should be plural 'languages' because it refers to more than one language. When counting or listing multiple items, the plural form is required.

× I usually watch Doctor House or Dexter Morgan or Invisible for like that and which greatly enchants my language skills.

✓ I usually watch shows like Doctor House, Dexter Morgan, or Invisible, which greatly enhance my language skills.

The phrase 'for like that' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'shows like' to indicate examples. Also, 'enchants' is incorrect here; 'enhance' is the proper verb to describe improvement.

× I don't think learning a new language is hard because when you learning a new language you have to see the culture and vocabulary they usually use after.

✓ I don't think learning a new language is hard because when you learn a new language, you have to understand the culture and the vocabulary they usually use.

The phrase 'when you learning' is incorrect; it should be 'when you learn' to match the present tense. Also, 'have to see' is better expressed as 'have to understand' in this context.

× I firmly believe there is no impossible for a person and for learning a new language.

✓ I firmly believe that nothing is impossible for a person when learning a new language.

The phrase 'there is no impossible' is incorrect; 'nothing is impossible' is the correct expression. Also, 'for learning' should be 'when learning' to indicate the context.

× I think I will because I love learning languages a lot and in the future I will.

✓ I think I will because I love learning languages a lot and I will continue to do so in the future.

The sentence is repetitive with 'I will' twice. Adding 'continue to do so' clarifies the future intention and improves sentence flow.

× I would like to learn German and as I said I'm German B1.

✓ I would like to learn German, and as I said, I have German at B1 level.

The phrase 'I'm German B1' is incorrect. It should be 'I have German at B1 level' to correctly express language proficiency.

× I want to make C1 level after.

✓ I want to reach C1 level afterwards.

The phrase 'make C1 level' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'reach C1 level' to indicate achieving a language proficiency level.

× I wanna learn French, Italian and Chinese actually.

✓ I want to learn French, Italian, and Chinese, actually.

'Wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speaking or writing. Also, commas are needed to separate the items in the list.

× I heard a quote about if you learn a new language, you make a new personality for yourself.

✓ I heard a quote that says if you learn a new language, you create a new personality for yourself.

The phrase 'a quote about if' is incorrect. It should be 'a quote that says if' to introduce the content of the quote properly.

× I firmly believe this quote after I wanted to be a translator a substantial.

✓ I firmly believe this quote because I wanted to be a translator seriously.

The word 'after' is incorrectly used; 'because' fits better to show reason. 'A substantial' is incorrect; 'seriously' or 'earnestly' is appropriate to express intention.

× I believe I will do it in the future.

✓ I believe I will do it in the future.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the future tense context; no correction needed.