Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dil sayısını belirtmeniz ve neden İngilizceyi sevdiğinizi açıklamanız iyi. Ancak, cümle yapılarınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. "I find very easy to learn" ifadesi yerine "I find it very easy to learn" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "English has a grammar structure compared to other languages" cümlesi anlam açısından net değil. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız.

例: I can speak three languages: Turkish, English, and German. My favorite language is English because I find it very easy to learn and useful for communication worldwide. Moreover, English grammar is simpler compared to some other languages, which makes learning it more enjoyable.

提案: Cevabınızda fikir belirtmeniz olumlu ancak cümle yapılarınızda ve anlatımınızda karışıklık var. "childhood it's will come easier" gibi ifadeler doğru değil. Ayrıca, düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla desteklemelisiniz. Örneğin, "because" bağlacını doğru kullanmalısınız.

例: I think learning a new language is difficult, especially for adults. Compared to children, adults find it harder because children can learn languages naturally by listening, even if they don't understand everything at first.

提案: Cevabınızda gelecekte öğrenmek istediğiniz dilleri belirtmeniz güzel. Ancak, "umm" gibi dolgu kelimelerinden kaçınmalı ve cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğru yapmalısınız. Ayrıca, neden bu dilleri sevdiğinizi daha spesifik açıklamalısınız.

例: I plan to learn several languages in the future, such as French, Russian, and Chinese. I enjoy both European and Asian languages because speaking them can open up many opportunities for communication and cultural understanding.

提案: Cevabınızda neden İngilizce öğrendiğinizi açıklamaya çalışmışsınız ancak ifadeleriniz çok karışık ve anlaşılması zor. "There is a one rule about translation about not written" gibi cümleler anlam açısından net değil. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümleler kurmalısınız.

例: I learn English because it is an essential language for communication worldwide. Nowadays, many people use English as a common language, and knowing it helps in many situations, including translation and travel.

× I can speak 3 languages, Turkish, English and German.

✓ I can speak 3 languages: Turkish, English, and German.

The original sentence lacks proper punctuation to separate the list of languages. Using a colon before the list and commas between items clarifies the plural list of languages.

× My favorite language is English because I find very easy to learn and very useful for communication around the world.

✓ My favorite language is English because I find it very easy to learn and very useful for communication around the world.

The sentence is missing the pronoun 'it' after 'find' which is necessary to complete the object of the verb. Without 'it', the sentence is grammatically incomplete.

× Additionally, English has a grammar structure compared to other languages.

✓ Additionally, English has a simpler grammar structure compared to other languages.

The phrase 'a grammar structure' is awkward; 'grammar structure' is usually uncountable or described with an adjective. Adding 'simpler' clarifies the comparison and improves the sentence.

× I think it is because if we compare adulthood to childhood, childhood it's will come easier to learn language more than adulthood.

✓ I think it is because if we compare adulthood to childhood, learning a language comes easier in childhood than in adulthood.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words like 'it's will'. The corrected sentence rearranges the structure for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Because childhood you can learn with hearing, but you cannot understand what hearing.

✓ Because in childhood you can learn by hearing, but you cannot understand what you hear.

The sentence lacks prepositions and correct pronouns. 'Learn with hearing' should be 'learn by hearing', and 'what hearing' should be 'what you hear' to be grammatically correct.

× I will learn different languages, for instance French, umm, Russian and Chinese.

✓ I will learn different languages, for instance, French, Russian, and Chinese.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs commas to separate the list properly. Also, 'umm' is informal and unnecessary in written form.

× I love these languages. I love European languages and Asian languages because I think it is very useful to speak.

✓ I love these languages. I love European and Asian languages because I think it is very useful to speak them.

The sentence is missing the object pronoun 'them' after 'speak' to clarify what is being spoken.

× There is a one rule about translation about not written.

✓ There is one rule about translation that is not written.

The phrase 'There is a one rule' is incorrect; 'a' and 'one' are redundant. Also, 'about not written' is unclear and needs rephrasing to 'that is not written'.

× It is you have to learn English no matter what.

✓ It is that you have to learn English no matter what.

The sentence is missing the conjunction 'that' to connect the clauses properly.

× And additionally I think it is true because in the in these days they usually choose three or five language translators.

✓ Additionally, I think it is true because these days they usually choose three or five language translators.

The phrase 'in the in these days' is redundant and incorrect. Removing 'in the' and starting with 'these days' improves clarity and correctness.