Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте повторений и используйте связующие слова для плавности. Например, вместо "I still do it" лучше сказать "and I continue to learn it." Также можно добавить немного деталей, чтобы ответ был более содержательным.

例: I can speak Russian, which is my native language, and English. I started learning English when I was four years old, and I have been studying it ever since.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечеткости, например, использование "he" вместо "you". Следует использовать правильные местоимения и более точные слова, например, "grammar" вместо "grammatics". Также стоит структурировать ответ, используя связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because you need to understand grammar rules, exceptions, vocabulary, and pronunciation. Moreover, it requires a lot of time and practice.

提案: Ответ хороший, но можно сделать его более естественным и связным, используя связующие слова и избегая повторений. Например, "because" можно заменить на "since" или "as" для разнообразия. Также стоит немного расширить ответ, добавив детали.

例: Yes, I definitely want to learn Spanish because I plan to study at a university in Spain in the future. Since I will live there, knowing Spanish will help me avoid problems and communicate effectively.

提案: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать связующие слова, чтобы сделать ответ более плавным и логичным. Например, можно сказать "I learn English because I want to travel around the world, and English is important since many people speak it nowadays."

例: I learn English because I want to travel around the world, and English is important since many people speak it nowadays.

× I started to learn English when I was four years old and I still do it.

✓ I started learning English when I was four years old and I still do it.

The verb 'start' is commonly followed by the gerund form (-ing) rather than the infinitive 'to learn'. Using 'started learning' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× Yes, of course, because he needs to learn grammatics, exceptions, phrases, words, alphabet and also you need to learn how to speak English.

✓ Yes, of course, because you need to learn grammar, exceptions, phrases, words, the alphabet and also you need to learn how to speak English.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring generally to 'you' as the learner. Also, 'grammatics' is incorrect; the correct term is 'grammar'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'alphabet'.

× Yes, of course, because he needs to learn grammatics, exceptions, phrases, words, alphabet and also you need to learn how to speak English.

✓ Yes, of course, because you need to learn grammar, exceptions, phrases, words, the alphabet and also you need to learn how to speak English.

The noun 'alphabet' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific set of letters. Omitting 'the' before 'alphabet' is incorrect.

× I learn English because in the future I want to travel around the world to know English is important because in our days everyone speak English.

✓ I learn English because in the future I want to travel around the world. I know English is important because nowadays everyone speaks English.

The sentence is a run-on and has tense and subject-verb agreement errors. 'To know' should be 'I know' as a separate clause. 'In our days' is incorrect; 'nowadays' is the correct adverb. 'Everyone speak' should be 'everyone speaks' to agree with the singular subject 'everyone'.