Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为冗长且结构不够清晰，建议开头直接回答问题，随后用简洁的细节支持，避免重复表达。

例: I can speak Chinese and English. English is my second language, which I have been learning for several years. I can use it to communicate in daily life and read English newspapers.

提案: 回答内容较好，但缺少连接词使句子衔接不够流畅，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because it requires a lot of time and effort. Moreover, it can be an arduous journey, especially when the language is very different from your mother tongue.

提案: 回答中有些重复，建议简化表达并使用连接词使句子更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I plan to learn Spanish in the future because my experience with English will help me learn it more easily.

提案: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更自然。

例: I learn English because it is a compulsory subject in China, and students must pass exams. Additionally, mastering English will help me have better opportunities in the future.

× learning a different language takes time and a lot of efforts.

✓ learning a different language takes time and a lot of effort.

“effort”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“efforts”。应使用单数形式表示“努力”。

× In the future I'm planning to learn a new language and that language I think is Spanish because I have been learning English for many years.

✓ In the future I'm planning to learn a new language, and I think that language is Spanish because I have been learning English for many years.

原句中“that language I think is Spanish”语序不正确，应调整为“I think that language is Spanish”以符合英语语法习惯。

× So I think it gives me an advantage in learning Spanish.

✓ So I think it gives me an advantage when learning Spanish.

“advantage in learning”虽然常见，但更准确的表达是“advantage when learning”，表示在学习时具有优势。