Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น คำว่า 'multi rinkua' ไม่ถูกต้อง ควรใช้คำว่า 'multilingual' และปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่ชัดเจนหรือผิดไวยากรณ์

例: I am multilingual. My native language is Thai because I was born in Thailand. I can also communicate in English and Chinese, but I am more fluent in Thai.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น ใช้ 'challenging' แทน 'challenge' และเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล

例: From my experience, learning a new language is quite challenging because it requires a lot of time to study vocabulary, grammar, and other aspects.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค และหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เหมาะสมหรือผิดความหมาย เช่น 'modern gas' ควรเป็น 'modern languages'

例: Yes, I am interested in learning Japanese because I am a big fan of Japanese culture. Also, learning modern languages opens up more opportunities and can improve your lifestyle.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'forward education' ควรเป็น 'further education' และ 'this tanker' ควรเป็น 'this skill' หรือ 'this language' รวมถึงเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล

例: I study English because I need to use it in many aspects of my life, such as further education, travel, and personal interest. This language is very helpful for me.

× I am a multi rinkua.

✓ I am multilingual.

The phrase 'multi rinkua' is incorrect and likely a misspelling or misuse. The correct term is 'multilingual' to describe someone who speaks multiple languages.

× I also communicate with English and Chinese but it not as foreign as Thai.

✓ I also communicate in English and Chinese, but they are not as familiar as Thai.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to two languages; 'they' should be used for plural. Also, 'communicate with' should be 'communicate in' when referring to languages.

× learning a new language is completely challenge as it require a lot of time to study vocabulary, grammar and others.

✓ learning a new language is completely challenging as it requires a lot of time to study vocabulary, grammar, and other aspects.

The adjective 'challenge' should be the gerund 'challenging' to describe the experience. Also, 'require' should be 'requires' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Others' is vague; 'other aspects' is clearer.

× it require a lot of time to study vocabulary, grammar and others.

✓ it requires a lot of time to study vocabulary, grammar, and other aspects.

The verb 'require' must be in third person singular form 'requires' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes I know interested in learning Japanese as I am a big fan of Japanese culture.

✓ Yes, I am interested in learning Japanese as I am a big fan of Japanese culture.

The phrase 'I know interested' is incorrect; it should be 'I am interested' to correctly express interest.

× Also learning modern gas means opening up more opportunity which promote your lifestyle.

✓ Also, learning modern languages means opening up more opportunities which promote your lifestyle.

'Modern gas' is likely a typo for 'modern languages'. 'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities' to match 'more'. 'Promote' should be 'promotes' to agree with singular 'which' referring to 'learning'.

× which promote your lifestyle.

✓ which promotes your lifestyle.

The verb 'promote' should be in third person singular 'promotes' to agree with the singular subject 'which'.

× Such as forward education, travel and personal interest, this tanker is very helpful with.

✓ Such as further education, travel, and personal interest, this skill is very helpful.

'Forward education' is incorrect; 'further education' is the correct phrase. 'Tanker' is likely a typo for 'skill'. The phrase 'helpful with' is incomplete; 'helpful' alone suffices here.