Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and fluent. Try to use a more natural sentence structure and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of "now I started to learn French," say "I'm currently learning French." Also, consider adding a linking phrase to make your answer smoother.

例: I can speak Russian and English, and I'm currently learning French.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I don't think learning a new language is difficult if you live in a country where it's spoken. However, it can be challenging when the language is completely new to you.

提案: Your answer is understandable but informal and contains some errors. Use more formal language and clearer sentence structures. Also, explain your reasons more specifically and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: To be honest, I don't have specific plans yet, but I would like to learn Spanish and French because I want to become a polyglot.

提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has many grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid confusing phrases. Also, provide specific reasons for learning English.

例: I started learning English seriously at a young age because I realized it would be very useful for my future. I love the language because it's beautiful, and I hope to become fluent one day.

× I can speak Russian and English and now I started to learn French.

✓ I can speak Russian and English and now I have started to learn French.

The sentence uses 'started' which is the simple past tense, but the context implies a recent action continuing to the present. The present perfect tense 'have started' is appropriate here to indicate that the action began recently and is relevant now.

× I don't think that it's difficult when you live on this language, but when it's like a new language that you never have heard, it can be a little bit difficult.

✓ I don't think that it's difficult when you live with this language, but when it's like a new language that you have never heard, it can be a little bit difficult.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'live' in this context; 'live with' or 'live in' is more appropriate. Also, 'never have heard' should be 'have never heard' to follow correct word order in present perfect tense.

× Tell the truth, I really don't plan anything, but I wanna talk in Spanish and French.

✓ To tell the truth, I really don't plan anything, but I want to speak Spanish and French.

'Tell the truth' should be 'To tell the truth' as an idiomatic expression. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech. Also, 'talk in' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'speak' when referring to languages.

× I think it's my calls because I really want to be a polyglot.

✓ I think it's my call because I really want to be a polyglot.

'Calls' is plural and incorrect here; the correct singular noun is 'call' meaning decision or choice. The pronoun 'it's' correctly refers to 'my call'.

× I started learning English so hardly in this age because I really realized that that's it can be so useful in my future and I think my soul really talking in English.

✓ I started learning English so hard at this age because I really realized that it can be very useful in my future and I think my soul really enjoys speaking English.

'So hardly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'so hard'. 'In this age' should be 'at this age'. 'That's it can be' is incorrect; 'it can be' is correct. 'My soul really talking' is incomplete; 'my soul really enjoys speaking' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I love this language so much, it's so beautiful and I hope I can make a seat too.

✓ I love this language so much, it's so beautiful and I hope I can make a seat too.

The phrase 'make a seat' is incorrect and unclear. Possibly the intended meaning is 'make a seat' as in 'make a place' or 'make a seat for myself' but this is not standard. A better phrase would be 'I hope I can take a seat' or 'I hope I can make a place for myself.' However, since the instruction is to correct only mistakes in the provided grammar problem types, and 'make a seat' is not listed, no correction is applied here.