Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。文を簡潔にし、正しい文法を使い、感情や理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: I can speak Spanish, English, and Japanese. Currently, I am studying Chinese, which is quite difficult for Japanese people, but I find it exciting to learn.

提案: 文法の誤りと冗長な表現があります。接続詞を使って論理的に話し、具体的な理由を述べる練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because it takes a lot of time and requires memorizing many vocabulary words and grammar rules. Especially, grammar can be very challenging.

提案: 意味が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I want to learn more languages in the future. For example, I want to improve my Spanish and English because I plan to live in Texas, where many people speak these languages.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、正しい表現を使う練習をしましょう。

例: I learn English because it is widely spoken around the world. Also, I want to live in the US, so I need to speak English fluently to communicate easily.

× I am but and I am studying Chinese and will see it.

✓ I am studying Chinese and will continue to do so.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect verb forms. 'I am but' is incomplete and 'will see it' is not appropriate here. The correct form uses the present continuous 'am studying' to indicate ongoing action and 'will continue to do so' to express future intention.

× It is very difficult for Japanese people but it is excite me.

✓ It is very difficult for Japanese people but it excites me.

The adjective 'excite' is incorrectly used; the verb should be in third person singular form 'excites' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'excite' is a verb, so it should not be used as an adjective here.

× Learning a new language takes much time and I have to learn remember many kinds of vocabulary and grammars.

✓ Learning a new language takes a lot of time and I have to learn and remember many kinds of vocabulary and grammar.

'Much time' is less common in affirmative sentences; 'a lot of time' is more natural. 'Learn remember' lacks a conjunction 'and'. 'Grammars' is incorrect as 'grammar' is uncountable and should not be pluralized.

× Grammar is it is very difficult.

✓ Grammar is very difficult.

The phrase 'is it is' is redundant and incorrect. The correct sentence simply states 'Grammar is very difficult.'

× Yes I will I want to talk Spanish and English because I want to leave Texas umm there is many people so I have to much another languages.

✓ Yes, I will. I want to speak Spanish and English because I want to leave Texas. Umm, there are many people, so I need to learn more languages.

'I want to talk Spanish' should be 'I want to speak Spanish'. 'There is many people' should be 'there are many people' (subject-verb agreement). 'I have to much another languages' is incorrect; 'I need to learn more languages' is appropriate. Also, sentence structure is improved by splitting into clearer sentences.

× Most people can understand English, so I learn and I want to leave US.

✓ Most people can understand English, so I learn it and I want to live in the US.

'Leave US' is incorrect; likely intended 'live in the US'. Also, 'learn' should be followed by the object 'it' referring to English.

× It is a mother language, so I have to speak free influently.

✓ It is a native language, so I have to speak fluently and freely.

'Mother language' is better expressed as 'native language'. 'Free influently' is incorrect; the adverbs 'fluently' and 'freely' should be used to describe speaking ability.