Language— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What languages can you speak?
受験者
Well, I can speak English, Cantonese and the mandarins and also another very local language. It is Lei Zhou. Yeah.
試験官
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
受験者
Yeah, I think it's very difficult for me to learn a good umm, language because, you know, I just got the COVID twice, so it's hard for me to remember something clearly. But I know a new.
試験官
Will you learn other languages in the future?
受験者
Well, if I have a free time, I prefer to learn a new languages so that I can make more new frames from different backgrounds and then we can communicate with different new languages.
試験官
Why do you learn English?
受験者
Well, I think English is an essential language especially for the international markets and the IT help us to communicate effectively around the world and also it can make us some more international.
評価
総合
Part 1
What languages can you speak?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“the mandarins”应为“Mandarin”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简洁明了地列举语言，避免多余词汇。
例: I can speak English, Cantonese, Mandarin, and a local language called Leizhou.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议直接回答问题，避免无关内容，使用连贯的句子表达观点。
例: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because it requires a lot of practice and memory.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“a free time”应为“free time”，“a new languages”应为“new languages”。表达不够清晰，建议使用简单准确的句子表达意图。
例: If I have free time, I would like to learn new languages to communicate with people from different cultures.
Why do you learn English?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法和表达不准确的问题，如“the IT help us”应为“it helps us”，且句子结构不够流畅。建议使用准确的语法和连贯的表达。
例: I learn English because it is essential for international business and helps us communicate effectively worldwide.
文法
× Well, I can speak English, Cantonese and the mandarins and also another very local language.
✓ Well, I can speak English, Cantonese, Mandarin and also another very local language.
这里“the mandarins”使用了复数形式且带有定冠词，实际上应为不可数名词“Mandarin”表示普通话。复数形式和定冠词使用错误。建议去掉定冠词并使用单数形式。
× Well, if I have a free time, I prefer to learn a new languages so that I can make more new frames from different backgrounds and then we can communicate with different new languages.
✓ Well, if I have free time, I prefer to learn new languages so that I can make more new friends from different backgrounds and then we can communicate with different new languages.
“a free time”中“time”是不可数名词，不应加不定冠词“a”。“a new languages”中“languages”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。另外，“frames”应为“friends”，可能是拼写错误。建议去掉冠词并改正拼写。
× Well, I think English is an essential language especially for the international markets and the IT help us to communicate effectively around the world and also it can make us some more international.
✓ Well, I think English is an essential language, especially for international markets, and IT helps us to communicate effectively around the world and also it can make us more international.
“the international markets”中“markets”前不需要定冠词“the”，因为泛指。动词“help”主语是单数“IT”，应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”。“make us some more international”中“some”多余，应去掉。建议调整冠词，动词形式和去除多余词。
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