Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and redundant. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated phrases. For example, clearly state the languages you speak and your proficiency in each.

例: I can speak three languages: Hindi, Punjabi, and English. Hindi and Punjabi are my native languages, and I am also fluent in English, which I use daily for communication and studies.

提案: Your answer has good content but is unclear due to grammar mistakes and filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the difficulties. Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure.

例: Yes, learning a new language is challenging, especially because grammar rules can be complex and numerous. For instance, mastering verb tenses and sentence structure requires a lot of practice and patience.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words and grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and be specific about your plans. Avoid vague phrases and repetition.

例: Yes, I definitely want to learn new languages in the future. For example, I am interested in learning German because it will help me in my career. Currently, I am focusing on improving my English, but I plan to start German lessons soon.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid incomplete sentences.

例: I learn English because it is spoken in over 80 countries worldwide. Knowing English makes it easier for me to communicate when I travel abroad and helps me access more educational and job opportunities.

× Well, I can speak a number of languages, basically our speakers 3 languages like Hindi, Punjabi, uh, if we talk about my mother English as well as I also become uh familiar as well as a fluent person in English as well.

✓ Well, I can speak a number of languages. Basically, we speak 3 languages like Hindi, Punjabi, and English, which is my mother tongue. I have also become familiar with and fluent in English.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'our speakers 3 languages' which is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'we speak 3 languages' to correctly refer to the subject. Also, 'my mother English' is unclear; it should be 'English, which is my mother tongue'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Of course, yes, it is an uphill task in order to learn about a new language because there are certain sections in order to learn new languages like grammar, which is startup uh, which is a tough part uh, because there are a plethora offer rules as well as the principles if it is quite, quite difficult.

✓ Of course, yes, it is an uphill task to learn a new language because there are certain aspects like grammar, which is the starting point and a tough part, because there are a plethora of rules as well as principles. It is quite difficult.

The phrase 'learn about a new language' should be 'learn a new language' as 'learn' does not require 'about'. 'Sections' is incorrect; 'aspects' or 'parts' is better. 'Startup' is incorrect; 'starting point' is appropriate. 'Plethora offer' is a typo; it should be 'plethora of'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× Yes, definitely, uh, in the coming years, if I get a chance in order to learn about new languages, I'll definitely grab this opportunity because I want to know more about, uh, German language. And now recently I created a one thing more for dice language. Uh, so I do not have sufficient right now. So in definitely grab this opportunity.

✓ Yes, definitely. In the coming years, if I get a chance to learn new languages, I'll definitely grab this opportunity because I want to know more about the German language. Recently, I started learning German. However, I do not have sufficient knowledge right now, so I will definitely grab this opportunity.

The phrase 'in order to learn about new languages' is better as 'to learn new languages'. 'Created a one thing more for dice language' is unclear and corrected to 'started learning German'. 'Do not have sufficient' is incomplete; 'sufficient knowledge' is added. 'In definitely' is a typo for 'I will definitely'. Modal verbs are corrected for proper future intention.

× Well, English is the language that is spoken a word by the proximity more than 80 to 90 countries in the world. It is easy for me if I know about English, very difficult whenever I visit in any other country that I'm so that I can easily as well as.

✓ Well, English is the language that is spoken in more than 80 to 90 countries around the world. It is easy for me if I know English. It is very difficult whenever I visit any other country, so knowing English helps me communicate easily.

The phrase 'spoken a word by the proximity' is incorrect; it should be 'spoken in more than 80 to 90 countries'. 'If I know about English' should be 'if I know English'. The sentence 'very difficult whenever I visit in any other country that I'm so that I can easily as well as' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly. The 'there be' structure is corrected to proper usage.