Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法不够自然的问题，建议减少重复词汇，使用更自然流畅的表达，并且避免口头语“uh”。同时，回答可以更具体地说明使用这些语言的场合。

例: I can speak three languages. My native language is Mandarin, which I use every day. I also speak English, especially when I travel abroad. Additionally, I know some Taiwanese, which I use occasionally with friends.

提案: 回答表达了观点并给出了例子，但句子结构较简单，且部分表达不够准确。建议使用更连贯的句子结构，避免重复，并且用更准确的词汇表达原因。

例: Yes, I find learning a new language challenging. For instance, I tried studying Japanese at university, but I gave up after a month because I struggled to memorize the vocabulary quickly.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且有口头语。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的时态和语法，避免口头语，并且使回答更连贯。

例: I'm not sure, but I want to improve my English skills first. However, if I move to another country in the future, I might need to learn the local language to help me live there.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇（如fluency），避免重复，并且使句子结构更自然。

例: I started learning English because it was a required course at school. Now, I want to improve my English fluency so that I can communicate with people abroad and work for an international company in the future.

× I can speak, uh, English when I travel the other other country.

✓ I can speak, uh, English when I travel to other countries.

这里介词使用错误，应该用'travel to'表示去某个地方，且'other other country'重复且单数，应该改为复数'other countries'。

× I tried to learn Japanese in my university, but I learned only for a month because I think I couldn't remember it quickly, so I gave up.

✓ I tried to learn Japanese at my university, but I studied only for a month because I thought I couldn't remember it quickly, so I gave up.

'learned only for a month'表达不准确，应该用'studied'表示学习某门课程；'think'时态应与过去时一致，改为'thought'。

× I'm not sure I want to enhance my English skill at first.

✓ I'm not sure, but I want to enhance my English skills first.

'at first'用法不当，表达顺序时应用'first'；'skill'应为复数'skills'表示多方面能力。

× However if I move to other country in the future and maybe I'll need to learn the locals language to help me uh, life in this country, so I'm not sure.

✓ However, if I move to another country in the future, maybe I'll need to learn the local language to help me with life in this country, so I'm not sure.

'other country'应为'another country'表示另一个国家；'locals language'应为'local language'；'help me life'缺少介词，改为'help me with life'。

× At first I learned English because the school has this course, but now I want to enhance my English skill because I want to speak Fluence in in the other country, to speak with other people and I can work in the international company in the future.

✓ At first, I learned English because the school had this course, but now I want to enhance my English skills because I want to speak fluently in other countries, to speak with other people, and I can work in an international company in the future.

'has'应为过去时'had'；'skill'应为复数'skills'；'Fluence'应为副词'fluently'；'in in the other country'重复且用法错误，改为'in other countries'；'the international company'应为泛指'an international company'。