Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答较为自然且内容完整，但可以避免重复表达，比如“speak it in my daily life”与“Chinese is my mother tongue”信息重复。建议简化表达，突出重点，同时增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I speak two languages: Chinese, which is my mother tongue, and English. I use Chinese daily, but I am keen to improve my English to communicate better with foreigners.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子未完整结束，且缺少连接词使逻辑更连贯。建议完成句子并使用连接词如“furthermore”或“in addition”来丰富表达。

例: Yes, learning a new language is challenging because it involves more than memorizing vocabulary. For example, understanding the culture helps you use the language naturally. Furthermore, mastering pronunciation and grammar requires a lot of practice.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够准确，如“comic comics”和“better enjoyed more deeply”。建议注意语法和词汇搭配，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I would like to learn Japanese because I have recently become interested in Japanese comics. Learning the language would help me understand the stories better and enjoy them more deeply. Additionally, it would allow me to explore Japanese culture more openly.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但存在语法错误，如“examine proposal purpose”和“foreigner”。建议使用正确表达，如“exam purposes”和“foreigners”，并适当使用连接词。

例: There are two main reasons why I learn English. Firstly, it is a compulsory subject at my school, so I have to study it for exam purposes. Secondly, learning English helps me communicate with foreigners and improves my future career opportunities.

× Well, I speak 2 languages, Chinese and English.

✓ Well, I speak two languages, Chinese and English.

数字应使用英文单词形式，尤其是在正式场合中。这里将“2”改为“two”更符合英语书写规范。

× Also, mastering pronunciation and grammar rules requires a lot practice and.

✓ Also, mastering pronunciation and grammar rules requires a lot of practice.

短语中缺少介词“of”，正确表达应为“a lot of practice”，表示大量的练习。

× Yes, I would like to learn Japanese in the future because recently I've really gotten into the Japanese comic comics.

✓ Yes, I would like to learn Japanese in the future because recently I've really gotten into Japanese comics.

“comic comics”重复且不正确，应使用复数形式“comics”表示漫画。

× Learning the languages helped me understand the stories and better enjoyed more deeply.

✓ Learning the languages helped me understand the stories and enjoy them more deeply.

“better enjoyed”时态和结构错误，应使用动词原形“enjoy”与“helped”搭配，且“more deeply”修饰“enjoy”。

× Additionally, I could open my opinions to explore Japanese culture.

✓ Additionally, I could open my mind to explore Japanese culture.

“open my opinions”表达不正确，常用表达是“open my mind”，意为“开阔我的思维”。

× There are two main reasons why I learn it.

✓ There are two main reasons why I learn it.

此句无错误，保持原句。

× Firstly, English is a compulsory subject at my school, so I have to study it for examine proposal purpose.

✓ Firstly, English is a compulsory subject at my school, so I have to study it for examination purposes.

“examine proposal purpose”表达错误，应为“examination purposes”，表示“考试目的”。

× Secondly, learning English helps me communicate with foreigner and improves my future career opportunities.

✓ Secondly, learning English helps me communicate with foreigners and improves my future career opportunities.

“foreigner”应使用复数形式“foreigners”，表示“外国人”。