Language— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it contains some filler words like 'uh' and slight redundancy. Try to avoid fillers and make your sentences more concise and natural. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I can speak three languages: Chakma, which is my mother tongue, Bangla, which I learned at school, and English, which I find more challenging.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but includes filler words and some awkward phrasing like 'learning new objects.' Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid fillers. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, definitely. Learning a new language is difficult because it involves mastering new vocabulary, alphabets, and grammar rules, which can be challenging to understand and practice.

提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words. Try to avoid repeating 'because' and use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'is really impressed me.'

例: Yes, I would love to learn Korean in the future because I admire Korean culture and enjoy their dramas and movies, which have greatly impressed me.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy, such as 'in abroad' and repeating 'I have learned.' Try to use correct prepositions and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: I have learned English because I want to pursue higher studies abroad, and since the IELTS exam is required for admission, mastering English is essential for me.

× Well, I can speak 3 languages including Chakma, Bangla and English.

✓ Well, I can speak three languages including Chakma, Bangla, and English.

Numbers from one to ten are usually written in words in formal writing and speech. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in a list of three or more items (Oxford comma) for clarity.

× Uh, Chakma is my own mother tongue so it is uh quite easier for me to speak.

✓ Uh, Chakma is my own mother tongue so it is quite easy for me to speak.

The word 'easier' is a comparative adjective and requires a comparison. Here, 'easy' is the correct adjective to describe the difficulty level without comparison.

× And Bengali was taught in my school so it is quite easy for me.

✓ And Bengali was taught in my school so it is quite easy for me.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× But English is quite difficult for me.

✓ But English is quite difficult for me.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I believe learning a new language would be so difficult for someone because learning a new language means, uh, learning new objects, alphabets and words, which would be quite difficult to understand and practice.

✓ I believe learning a new language would be very difficult for someone because learning a new language means, uh, learning new vocabulary, alphabets, and words, which would be quite difficult to understand and practice.

The phrase 'so difficult' is informal; 'very difficult' is more appropriate here. Also, 'objects' is incorrect in this context; 'vocabulary' better fits the meaning when talking about language learning.

× Yes, I would love to learn a new language in the future, especially Korean because I really love Korean culture and language because the way they talk is really impressed me.

✓ Yes, I would love to learn a new language in the future, especially Korean because I really love Korean culture and language because the way they talk really impresses me.

The verb 'impressed' is past tense and incorrect here; the present tense 'impresses' agrees with the subject 'the way they talk'. Also, 'really' should come before the verb for correct adverb placement.

× Uh, because I really love Korean dramas and movies.

✓ Uh, I really love Korean dramas and movies.

Starting a sentence with 'because' without completing the thought creates a sentence fragment. Removing 'because' makes it a complete sentence.

× I have learned English because I want to pursue my higher studies in abroad.

✓ I have learned English because I want to pursue my higher studies abroad.

The phrase 'in abroad' is incorrect; 'abroad' does not require a preposition 'in'. Also, 'have learned' is acceptable but 'have been learning' might be more natural depending on context.

× For going to abroad, we need to sit for an IELTS exam which is an English exam.

✓ To go abroad, we need to sit for the IELTS exam, which is an English exam.

The phrase 'for going to abroad' is incorrect; 'to go abroad' is the correct infinitive form. Also, 'the IELTS exam' is specific and requires the definite article 'the'.

× That's why I I have learned English language.

✓ That's why I have learned the English language.

There is a repeated pronoun 'I I' which is a typographical error. Also, 'English language' requires the definite article 'the'.