Birthday— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但有些语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复使用“usually”，并且句子结构可以更简洁流畅。

例: On my birthday, I usually celebrate by having a nice meal with my best friends. Sometimes, I also spend time with my family. It's a great opportunity to be with the people I care about.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“go went out”和“dedicate cake”，表达不清晰。建议加强语法基础，使用正确的时态和词汇，并使句子更连贯。

例: When I was a child, I usually spent my birthday with my family. Sometimes we went out to a restaurant, and other times we had a small gathering at home. My parents always bought me a special cake, which I loved very much.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构和用词有些不自然，如“Except that I also love spend time”。建议使用更自然的连接词和表达方式，使内容更连贯。

例: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is very important because it is a special and meaningful day each year. Besides, I enjoy spending time with the people I care about. For me, a birthday is a day full of love and care.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有明显错误，句子结构混乱。建议理清思路，使用完整句子表达观点，并避免断句错误。

例: In Chinese tradition, a mother's birthday is usually the most important to celebrate in every family. It reflects respect and love, which are important values in Chinese culture.

× For me is great time to stay with people I care about.

✓ For me, it is a great time to stay with people I care about.

句子缺少主语，导致主谓不一致。应加上it作为形式主语，保证句子完整和语法正确。

× Well I was a kid. I usually spend my birthday with my family.

✓ Well, I was a kid. I usually spent my birthday with my family.

描述过去的习惯动作时，动词应使用过去时。这里的spend应改为spent。

× Sometimes we go went out to a restaurant and sometimes we just had a small gathering at home.

✓ Sometimes we went out to a restaurant and sometimes we just had a small gathering at home.

句中出现了重复的动词go went，应去掉go，使用过去时went。

× My parents always bought me a dedicate cake.

✓ My parents always bought me a dedicated cake.

形容词dedicate用错，应使用dedicated表示“专门的，特别的”。

× I loved the birthday and spent wisdom.

✓ I loved the birthday and gained wisdom.

动词spend后不应接wisdom，表达获得智慧应使用gain。

× Except that I also love spend time with people I care about.

✓ Besides that, I also love spending time with people I care about.

表达“除此之外”应使用Besides，且love后接动名词spending。

× For me, birthday is a day that related to love and care.

✓ For me, birthday is a day that is related to love and care.

关系从句缺少系动词is，导致句子不完整。

× I believe in Chinese tradition, the birthday of mom is always the most important to celebrate in every family is about the Chinese traditional and also it's a good.

✓ I believe in Chinese tradition, the birthday of the mother is always the most important to celebrate in every family. It is about Chinese tradition and also a good custom.

句子结构混乱，缺少冠词the，且表达不完整。应分句并补充冠词和完整表达。

× Treat and custom for Chinese.

✓ It is a treat and custom for Chinese people.

句子缺少主语和谓语，导致结构不完整，应补充完整句子。