Birthday— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What do you usually do on your birthday?
受験者
I always celebrate my birthday with my friends and I organize parties every year and I can say that I always look forward to my birthday parties.
試験官
What did you do on your birthday when you were young?
受験者
When I was young, I always celebrated my birthdays in the kindergarten with my friends and my parents always called DJ for my birthday parties and some musicians for enjoying and having relaxed.
試験官
Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?
受験者
Yeah, it is definitely important for me to celebrate my birthday because I always look forward to my birthday celebrations and I like to get some presents or I like to enjoy with my friends and listen to the music, etcetera.
試験官
Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?
受験者
I don't have any idea about it, but I think that in China the president's birthday is important to celebrate. But it doesn't matter it's China or other country. In every country presidents birthday celebration is more crucial.
評価
総合
Part 1
What do you usually do on your birthday?
スコア: 75.0提案: Cavabınız təbii və mövzuyla əlaqəlidir, lakin cümlələr çox uzun və təkrarlayıcıdır. Daha qısa və aydın ifadələr istifadə edin və əlavə dəstək verən məlumatlar üçün əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.
例: I usually celebrate my birthday by organizing a party with my friends. I look forward to these gatherings because they are fun and memorable.
What did you do on your birthday when you were young?
スコア: 70.0提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və qarışıqlıq var. Daha sadə və aydın cümlələr qurun, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edərək fikirlərinizi daha yaxşı ifadə edin.
例: When I was young, I celebrated my birthdays at kindergarten with my friends. My parents often hired a DJ and musicians to make the party enjoyable and relaxing.
Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?
スコア: 70.0提案: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və qeyri-dəqiqlik var. Daha konkret və qısa ifadələr istifadə edin, əlavə məlumatlar üçün əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.
例: Yes, celebrating my birthday is important to me because I enjoy spending time with friends, receiving presents, and listening to music.
Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?
スコア: 60.0提案: Cavabınız qeyri-müəyyəndir və mövzudan kənardır. Daha konkret və mövzuya uyğun cavab verin, fikirlərinizi əlaqələndirici sözlərlə dəstəkləyin.
例: I'm not sure, but I believe that in China, the most important birthday to celebrate is the president's. In many countries, leaders' birthdays are considered significant events.
文法
× my parents always called DJ for my birthday parties and some musicians for enjoying and having relaxed
✓ my parents always called a DJ for my birthday parties and some musicians to enjoy and relax
The phrase 'for enjoying and having relaxed' is incorrect. After 'called', the correct structure is to use 'to' + base verb form to express purpose. Therefore, 'to enjoy and relax' is correct. Also, 'a DJ' needs an article before it.
× But it doesn't matter it's China or other country
✓ But it doesn't matter if it's China or another country
The phrase 'it's China or other country' is missing a conjunction and article. The correct form is 'if it's China or another country' to express the condition properly.
× In every country presidents birthday celebration is more crucial
✓ In every country, the president's birthday celebration is more crucial
The phrase 'presidents birthday' lacks the possessive apostrophe and the singular form 'president's' is needed. Also, 'birthday celebration' is singular, so 'is' is correct. Adding 'the' before 'president's' is necessary for specificity.
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