Birthday— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，如“my my cousins”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: When I was young, I usually had a birthday party and invited my cousins and friends to join us and share a cake. However, now I rarely host a party because everyone, including my parents and friends, is very busy.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当（应使用过去时），且有口头语“uh”影响流畅度。建议减少口头语，注意时态，并丰富细节。

例: When I was young, I always played with my cousins and friends on my birthday. We shared a birthday cake and made wishes together.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“a a important day”和句子未完成。建议注意语法准确性，完整表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: It depends. When I was younger, I thought it was an important day because it meant I was growing up and entering a new stage of life. However, now I consider it a normal day and don't want to spend much time celebrating it.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如“a child a child's”和“for for”，且表达不够清晰。建议注意语法和词汇准确性，丰富细节，使用连接词。

例: From my perspective, a child's birthday is usually the most important for each family because children represent the family's future and hopes.

× Oh, when I was young, I usually have a birthday party at that day to invite my my cousins, my friends to join us and share a cake.

✓ Oh, when I was young, I usually had a birthday party on that day to invite my cousins and my friends to join us and share a cake.

句子描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时态。"have"应改为过去式"had"。此外，"at that day"应改为"on that day"，但根据题目要求只纠正语法问题。

× But now I hardly host a birthday party because everyone, including my parents, my friend is very busy.

✓ But now I hardly host a birthday party because everyone, including my parents and my friends, is very busy.

"my friend"应为复数形式"my friends"，因为前文提到的是多个人。

× Ah, when I was young I always play with my cousins and my friends on that day, uh, and uh, we shared a birthday cake and hope wishing.

✓ Ah, when I was young I always played with my cousins and my friends on that day, uh, and uh, we shared a birthday cake and made wishes.

描述过去的习惯动作，动词"play"应使用过去式"played"。"hope wishing"表达不正确，应改为"made wishes"。

× But now I think it's a normal day. I don't want to spend many time to.

✓ But now I think it's a normal day. I don't want to spend much time on it.

"many time"用法错误，"time"是不可数名词，应使用"much time"。此外，句尾缺少介词"on it"，但根据题目要求只纠正语法问题。

× From my perspective, usually a child a child's birthday is most important for for each family because the children is once a family's future and hopes.

✓ From my perspective, usually a child's birthday is most important for each family because the children are once a family's future and hopes.

"the children is"主谓不一致，"children"是复数，谓语动词应为复数形式"are"。