Birthday— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá ngắn và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn một cách chính xác và thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và phong phú hơn.

例: I usually play video games and eat cake with my family in the evening on my birthday. It's a fun and relaxing way to celebrate.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: When I was young, I usually ate cake and received presents from my parents, which made me very happy and excited.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh những từ không đúng ngữ cảnh. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important because it marks the day I was born and it makes me feel happy and grateful.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cố gắng sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Nếu không biết, bạn có thể nói rõ điều đó và đưa ra suy nghĩ cá nhân một cách lịch sự và tự nhiên.

例: As a Vietnamese, I am not very familiar with Chinese birthday traditions, but I think people usually celebrate the birthdays of their close family members or important figures.

× I usually play some video games and eat cake at the evening of my birthday.

✓ I usually play some video games and eat cake in the evening of my birthday.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to parts of the day like 'evening'. The correct preposition is 'in' for periods of the day such as morning, afternoon, and evening.

× I usually eat cake and receive presents from my parents when I were young.

✓ I usually ate cake and received presents from my parents when I was young.

The sentence refers to past events, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Also, 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I'; the correct form is 'was'.

× Is very happy and exciting.

✓ It was very happy and exciting.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'It was' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× Yes, I do. I think the bird celebrates.

✓ Yes, I do. I think the birthday should be celebrated.

The phrase 'the bird celebrates' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The intended meaning is about celebrating birthdays, so it should be corrected accordingly.

× My birthday is really important because it's mark my where when I born and it's very happy.

✓ My birthday is really important because it marks the day I was born and it makes me very happy.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'it's mark' should be 'it marks' for subject-verb agreement; 'my where when I born' is unclear and should be 'the day I was born'; 'it's very happy' is incorrect as 'it' cannot be happy, so 'it makes me very happy' is appropriate.

× As a Vietnamese, I don't know if China has an important celebrate birthday for a people.

✓ As a Vietnamese, I don't know if China has an important birthday celebration for its people.

The phrase 'celebrate birthday' is incorrect; the noun form 'birthday celebration' should be used. Also, 'for a people' is incorrect; 'for its people' is appropriate to refer to the population of China.