Birthday— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。例如，“prefer go outside”应为“prefer to go outside”，“I my friends also like to give me some little gift”语句不完整且有语法错误。建议注意动词不定式的使用，避免语法错误，同时可以丰富细节，使回答更具体。

例: On my birthday, I usually prefer to go out and spend time with my friends. We often go shopping or watch a movie together. It's a great way to celebrate this special day. My friends also like to give me small gifts, which makes me feel appreciated.

提案: 回答中存在时态混用和表达不清的问题，如“stay”应为“stayed”，“I'm really poised”表达不明确。建议注意时态一致性，避免使用不恰当的词汇，并且使表达更连贯和具体。

例: When I was a child, I often stayed at home with my parents. They would prepare a big birthday cake for me. I felt very happy and excited. Birthdays were very meaningful to me, and I have many fond memories from those times.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“prefer stay”应为“prefer to stay”，“my mom give me this important moment”表达不准确。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，同时可以更具体地说明为什么生日重要。

例: Nowadays, I prefer to spend my birthday with my parents. I think celebrating my birthday is very important because it reminds me of the gift of life and the love my family gives me. It is a meaningful occasion to appreciate these moments.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“parents birthday”应为“parents' birthdays”，“appreciate to them”表达错误。建议注意所有格的使用和介词搭配，同时可以增加细节说明为什么父母的生日重要。

例: In China, I believe the most important birthdays to celebrate are our parents' birthdays. Since they gave us life, it is a special day to show our gratitude and appreciation for everything they have done for us.

× On my birthday, I prefer go outside to stay with my friends.

✓ On my birthday, I prefer going outside to stay with my friends.

动词prefer后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里go应改为going。

× I my friends also like to give me some little gift.

✓ My friends also like to give me some little gifts.

gift是可数名词，表示礼物，前面用了some，应该用复数形式gifts。

× When I was a kid, I often stay with my parents.

✓ When I was a kid, I often stayed with my parents.

描述过去习惯动作，动词应使用过去时态，stay应改为stayed。

× They will prepare a big birthday cake for me.

✓ They prepared a big birthday cake for me.

描述过去发生的事情，不能用将来时will prepare，应使用过去时prepared。

× I'm really poised.

✓ I'm really pleased.

此处应表达“我很高兴”，用形容词pleased，poised意为“镇定的”，不符合语境。

× I think the when I was a kid, the birthday is so meaningful and I remember a lot of things.

✓ I think when I was a kid, the birthday was so meaningful and I remember a lot of things.

描述过去的事情，谓语动词应使用过去时，is改为was。

× Nowadays, I prefer stay with my parents.

✓ Nowadays, I prefer staying with my parents.

prefer后应接动名词形式，stay改为staying。

× my mom give me this important moment.

✓ my mom gives me this important moment.

主语my mom是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加s，give改为gives。

× at that day I have a life and my mom give me this important moment.

✓ on that day I have a life and my mom gives me this important moment.

表示具体某一天应使用介词on，而不是at。

× In China, I think we should remember our parents birthday because the parents give us life and at that day we need to appreciate to them.

✓ In China, I think we should remember our parents' birthdays because parents give us life and on that day we need to appreciate them.

parents birthday应为复数所有格parents' birthdays；appreciate后不加介词to；表示具体某一天用on。