Birthday— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“book a bunch of flower”应为“buy a bunch of flowers”。建议注意单复数形式和动词选择，同时可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: On my birthday, I usually buy a bunch of flowers and a birthday cake for myself. Then, I have dinner with my parents and friends outside to celebrate it.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但重复使用“would”显得单调。建议使用更多连接词和丰富细节，使表达更自然流畅。

例: When I was young, I usually received a birthday cake and enjoyed eating fried chicken and French fries to celebrate.

提案: 回答结构合理，但“a person who has a strong sense of ceremony”表达稍显生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important because I value traditions and enjoy receiving gifts from others.

提案: 回答内容准确且表达清晰，但“seven day holiday”应为“seven-day holiday”，注意复合形容词的正确使用。建议增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: In China, the most important birthday to celebrate is that of our country. During National Day, we have a seven-day holiday to mark the occasion.

× On my birthday I usually book a bunch of flower and a birthday cake for myself and I have dinner with my parents and friends outside to celebrate it.

✓ On my birthday I usually book a bunch of flowers and a birthday cake for myself and I have dinner with my parents and friends outside to celebrate it.

flower 应该用复数形式 flowers，因为这里指的是一束花，表示多个花朵。

× During the National Day, we will have a seven day holiday to celebrate it.

✓ During the National Day, we will have a seven-day holiday to celebrate it.

seven day 应该用连字符连接，构成复合形容词 seven-day，表示“七天的假期”。