Birthday— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在一些用词和语法错误，如“showing delicious birthday cake”应为“sharing”或“having”。建议注意动词搭配和表达的准确性，同时避免冗余，保持语言自然流畅。

例: On my birthday, I usually spend quality time with my family and close friends. The highlight is sharing a delicious birthday cake, which I sometimes bake myself to make the day more special. In the afternoon, I often go to the cinema with my friends to watch a comedy because it helps me relax and have fun together.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“allowed me to spending”应为“allowed me to spend”，以及“let me to do that”应为“let me do that”。建议加强语法准确性，使用连贯的句子结构，并丰富细节。

例: When I was a child, my parents usually allowed me to spend whole days watching cartoons on TV, which was quite unusual because they rarely let me do that. I also received some lovely presents from them, such as a baby doll, which made me very happy and excited.

提案: 回答较好，表达清晰且内容具体。但可以增加一些连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富词汇表达，使语言更自然。

例: Yes, I believe celebrating my birthday is quite important because it provides a special moment to reflect on the past year and appreciate the support from my family and friends. Moreover, it helps strengthen relationships through shared joy and memorable experiences.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法和表达错误，如“which is celebrate”应为“which is celebrated”，“remind”应为“reminds”，句子结构不完整且含义不清。建议加强语法基础，注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性，同时避免使用不恰当的词汇。

例: I think the most important birthday to celebrate in China is definitely National Day, which is celebrated in October. This day not only reminds us of the long struggle for independence and unity in the past, but also inspires hope and pride for the country's future development. Additionally, National Day celebrations often include various cultural events and fireworks.

× When I was a child, my parents usually allowed me to spending whole days watching cartoons on TV, which was quite unusual because they really let me to do that.

✓ When I was a child, my parents usually allowed me to spend whole days watching cartoons on TV, which was quite unusual because they really let me do that.

动词allow和let后面应接动词原形，而不是动名词或带to的不定式。这里应使用动词原形spend和do。

× I think the most important birthday to celebrate is definitely the National Day, which is celebrate on October.

✓ I think the most important birthday to celebrate is definitely the National Day, which is celebrated in October.

表示月份时应使用介词in，而不是on。动词celebrate应使用被动语态的过去分词celebrated。

× The first day not only remind us of the long struggle for independence and unite in the past, also inspired hopes and pride for the country's future development.

✓ The first day not only reminds us of the long struggle for independence and unity in the past, but also inspires hopes and pride for the country's future development.

not only... but also结构中，谓语动词需与主语一致，且两个并列部分应结构对称。remind和inspire应改为第三人称单数形式reminds和inspires，unite应改为名词unity。

× Additionally, National Day celebration often include paradise.

✓ Additionally, National Day celebrations often include parades.

paradise（天堂）用词错误，应为parades（游行）。且celebration应用复数形式celebrations以匹配often。