Birthday— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda "uh" kimi durğunluqları azaltmaq və cümlələri daha təbii və axıcı etmək üçün çalışın. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə etmək üçün əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin və cavabınızı maksimum 5 cümlə ilə məhdudlaşdırın.

例: I usually celebrate my birthday outdoors because I find it more enjoyable and interesting than staying at home. For example, I like going to different places each year to make the celebration special and memorable.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvləri azaltmaq və fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə etmək üçün sadə və düzgün cümlə quruluşlarından istifadə edin. Həmçinin, cavabınızı daha məntiqli etmək üçün əlaqələndirici sözlər əlavə edin və fikirlərinizi tam ifadə edin.

例: When I was young, I usually celebrated my birthday in different restaurants with my friends and relatives. I enjoyed trying new places and spending time with the same close people.

提案: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün və aydın etmək üçün qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və fikirlərinizi daha səlis ifadə edin. Əlavə olaraq, fikirlərinizi dəstəkləmək üçün səbəblər və nümunələr verin.

例: Yes, I think it is important to celebrate my birthday, even if it's just by buying a small cake. I don't always have a big party, but marking the day makes me feel special.

提案: Cavabınızda mövzunu daha aydın ifadə etmək üçün qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və fikirlərinizi daha səlis və məntiqli şəkildə ifadə edin. Həmçinin, mövzu ilə bağlı daha spesifik və əlaqəli məlumatlar əlavə edin.

例: Although I live in Azerbaijan and don't know much about China, I believe that mothers' birthdays are very important. People often celebrate them with big parties to show their appreciation.

× I like to celebrate my birthday, uh, out.

✓ I like to celebrate my birthday outside.

The preposition 'out' is incorrect in this context; 'outside' is the correct adverb to indicate being outdoors.

× I don't like in the house, uh, because, uh, celebrating birthday outside is more enjoyable and interesting for me.

✓ I don't like being in the house because celebrating my birthday outside is more enjoyable and interesting for me.

The phrase 'I don't like in the house' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'I don't like being in the house' to properly express the idea.

× I like celebrating in a different place, not the same things I usually.

✓ I like celebrating in different places, not the same things I usually do.

The phrase 'not the same things I usually' is incomplete and awkward; it should be 'not the same things I usually do' to complete the thought.

× Are you dealt of things in my birthday?

✓ Are you tired of things on my birthday?

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear; it seems the intended meaning is 'Are you tired of things on my birthday?'

× I like celebrating my birthday in the different ways, like in the different restaurants with the different people.

✓ I like celebrating my birthday in different ways, like in different restaurants with different people.

The use of 'the' before 'different' is incorrect here; 'different' should be used without 'the' to indicate variety.

× Yeah, with the same people.

✓ Yes, with the same people.

Using 'Yeah' is informal; 'Yes' is more appropriate in this context.

× I generally spend my birthday with my friends or with my relatives, but I prefer.

✓ I generally spend my birthday with my friends or relatives, but I prefer something else.

The sentence ends abruptly; it needs completion to clarify what is preferred.

× At least I have to buy a little cake for just celebrating.

✓ At least I have to buy a small cake just to celebrate.

'A little cake' is incorrect; 'a small cake' is the correct quantifier for countable items like cake.

× It doesn't matter. I don't do like party all my in all my birthday.

✓ It doesn't matter. I don't have a party on all my birthdays.

The original sentence is ungrammatical; 'I don't have a party on all my birthdays' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× Actually, I live in Azerbaijan, that's the I don't have a lot of information about China, but I think that mother's birthday is more important than others birthday.

✓ Actually, I live in Azerbaijan, so I don't have a lot of information about China, but I think that a mother's birthday is more important than others' birthdays.

The sentence has pronoun and article errors; 'that's the' should be 'so', and 'others birthday' should be 'others' birthdays' to show possession.

× Maybe people celebrate their mothers in in a big with a big party.

✓ Maybe people celebrate their mothers with a big party.

The phrase 'in in a big with a big party' is incorrect; 'with a big party' is the correct prepositional phrase.