Birthday— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır, ancak "uh" gibi dolgu kelimelerini azaltarak daha akıcı konuşabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha kısa ve net tutarak etkili bir yanıt verebilirsiniz.

例: Usually, I spend my birthday with my family. My husband buys me special gifts and a delicious cake, and we celebrate together with our daughter.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları var ve "uh" gibi dolgu kelimeleri fazla. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha doğru ve akıcı hale getirmek için zaman uyumuna dikkat edin.

例: When I was young, I spent my birthdays with my mom, dad, and little sister. We blew out the candles and took many photos to capture those special moments.

提案: Cümleniz karışık ve anlamı tam olarak ifade etmiyor. Daha açık ve net ifadeler kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha iyi aktarabilirsiniz.

例: Actually, I don't think my birthday is the most special day. For me, New Year's Day is more important and meaningful.

提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamaya çalışın. Eğer bilginiz yoksa, bunu kibarca ifade edip genel bir cevap verebilirsiniz.

例: I'm not very familiar with Chinese traditions, but I think people usually celebrate the birthdays of close family members as the most important.

× Uh, usually on my birthdays I spend my time with my family and my husband by uh, my husband buys me some special gifts and a delicious birthday cake and we blow it together with our daughter.

✓ Uh, usually on my birthday I spend my time with my family and my husband. My husband buys me some special gifts and a delicious birthday cake, and we blow it out together with our daughter.

The word 'birthdays' should be singular 'birthday' because the question refers to a usual single birthday event each year. Also, 'blow' should be 'blow it out' to correctly describe blowing out birthday candles.

× Uh, it was same, uh, I was spend my time with my mom and my father and my little sister and we blow out the candles and of course we took a lot of photos to, uh, capture this amazing moments.

✓ Uh, it was the same, uh, I spent my time with my mom and my father and my little sister, and we blew out the candles, and of course we took a lot of photos to capture these amazing moments.

The phrase 'I was spend' is incorrect; it should be 'I spent' to use the simple past tense. 'We blow out' should be 'we blew out' to match past tense. 'This amazing moments' should be 'these amazing moments' to agree in number.

× Actually, no, it's not umm, the most special day for me in the year it would. It is new year. I think it's more, uh, believable for me.

✓ Actually, no, it's not the most special day for me in the year. It would be New Year. I think it's more meaningful for me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'It would' is incomplete and should be 'It would be New Year.' Also, 'believable' is incorrect in this context; 'meaningful' fits better. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.