Relax— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复表达，如“by our by our own”，并且注意句子结构的完整性。可以更自然地表达地点和感受，避免口语化的错误。

例: Recently, I usually relax at my flat in Guangzhou, where I live with my girlfriend. We have decorated it ourselves, making it a very comfortable and peaceful place for me to unwind.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“leaned down”和“quantitative topic”，应使用正确表达并避免重复。建议用连贯的句子描述与谁放松及活动内容。

例: I usually relax with my girlfriend. We enjoy watching movies together on Friday nights using our projector and stereo, which makes the experience very enjoyable.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“listening listen light music”，应注意动词形式和句子完整性。建议更清晰地表达音乐类型和个人感受。

例: Yes, I find music relaxing, but it depends on the type. I usually listen to light music in the morning to help me concentrate and prepare for the day, but I don't find rap music relaxing.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“pick up really habit”和“不完整的句子”。建议用完整句子表达放松方式和原因，避免语法错误。

例: To relax, I like reading in the library because I developed this habit as a child. Reading helps me unwind and forget about my worries.

× We rent a small flat and decorate that place by our by our own.

✓ We rent a small flat and decorate that place by ourselves.

这里“by our by our own”重复且用法错误，正确表达应该是“by ourselves”，表示“我们自己”。这是单复数和反身代词的错误。

× I always feel peaceful at that room.

✓ I always feel peaceful in that room.

介词“at”用于表示具体地点时不合适，描述在房间内应使用“in”。

× I always feel leaned down and I miss her.

✓ I always feel down and I miss her.

“leaned down”用法错误，表达情绪低落应使用“feel down”。

× They have quantitative topic to talk about and we always watch movie at Freddy night and we have a projector and stereo it's just.

✓ They have a variety of topics to talk about and we always watch movies on Friday night. We have a projector and stereo; it's just great.

“quantitative topic”用词不当，应为“a variety of topics”；“movie”应复数“movies”；“at Freddy night”应为“on Friday night”；句子结构不完整，需分句表达。

× Like for me I always listening listen light music after I wake up just for making me concentrate and be preparing for a new day and for some strong music like rap I don't.

✓ For me, I always listen to light music after I wake up just to help me concentrate and prepare for a new day. For some strong music like rap, I don't.

“always listening listen”重复且错误，应为“always listen to”；“just for making me concentrate”应为“just to help me concentrate”；“be preparing”应为“prepare”。

× It would be reading in library because I pick up really habit when I was a child.

✓ It would be reading in the library because I picked up the habit when I was a child.

“pick up”应使用过去式“picked up”，表示过去发生的动作；“library”前应加定冠词“the”。

× I always feel unwind reading, no war or other literatures and the most important thing is that I also feel.

✓ I always feel relaxed reading, no war novels or other literature, and the most important thing is that I also feel...

“feel unwind”用法错误，应为“feel relaxed”；“literatures”不可数名词，应为“literature”；句子不完整，需补充。