Relax— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Where do you go to relax recently?
受験者
If I want to relax, I usually prefer staying at home because the atmosphere make me feel relaxed and comfortable.
試験官
Who do you usually relax with?
受験者
When I want to relax and get my mind off everything going on in my life, I usually prefer staying alone. But for some change I like going out, maybe with a friend that I feel comfortable with.
試験官
Do you think listening to music is relaxing?
受験者
Yes, for me music is my go to when I wanna relax uh, it make me feel comfortable and unwind and it get my mind off everything going on in my life. Uh so and I like listening to different types of music, maybe classical music, pop music.
試験官
What do you do to relax?
受験者
It usually depends on how I feel that day. Maybe a hot shower while listening to some music, maybe watching a movie or a series. Also I like reading sometimes.
評価
総合
Part 1
Where do you go to relax recently?
スコア: 75.0提案: Try to correct grammar mistakes and make your answer more natural by using correct verb forms and adding linking words. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas effectively.
例: I usually prefer staying at home to relax because the atmosphere there makes me feel comfortable and peaceful.
Who do you usually relax with?
スコア: 80.0提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by providing more specific details about your friend or activities.
例: I usually prefer relaxing alone to clear my mind, but sometimes I go out with a close friend who I feel comfortable with to enjoy a change of scenery.
Do you think listening to music is relaxing?
スコア: 70.0提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use correct verb forms. Also, try to organize your answer with linking words and give more specific examples of music genres or songs.
例: Yes, music is my go-to way to relax because it helps me unwind and take my mind off stress. For example, I enjoy listening to classical and pop music depending on my mood.
What do you do to relax?
スコア: 78.0提案: Try to combine your ideas into a more coherent answer using linking words and avoid repeating 'maybe'. Also, add more specific details about your preferences.
例: Depending on how I feel, I might take a hot shower while listening to music, watch a movie or series, or sometimes read a book to relax.
文法
× If I want to relax, I usually prefer staying at home because the atmosphere make me feel relaxed and comfortable.
✓ If I want to relax, I usually prefer staying at home because the atmosphere makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.
The subject 'atmosphere' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.
× Yes, for me music is my go to when I wanna relax uh, it make me feel comfortable and unwind and it get my mind off everything going on in my life.
✓ Yes, for me music is my go to when I wanna relax uh, it makes me feel comfortable and unwind and it gets my mind off everything going on in my life.
The subject 'it' refers to 'music' which is singular, so the verbs should be 'makes' and 'gets' instead of 'make' and 'get' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.
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